The autumn wind is cold when it blows late at night
She dares to run against it, prepared for the fight
Swift gusts of daggers shoot through her hair
Still she moves forward, where others wouldn't dare
She knows the road is rough and she knows the road is long
Yet she keeps on travelin' because her heart is strong
No troubles big and small can hold this ol' girl down
She looks them in the eye, never falling to the ground
I believe in her power, it shines like the sun
Her beauty and her strength can never be outdone
Along with her beauty and the weapon on truth
She has the heart of a lady and the spirit of a wolf.
Author notes
A poem for my lovely lady stone.
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This is a beautiful poem, I especially like the first two lines. However, I feel that a couple of the rhymes aren't perfect, and that sort of affects the whole poem.
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great
the spirit of the wolf in the wild will look out for the lost child or any one with a pure heart and rip the heart out of a person who is not so pure keep doing well
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Awesome
Beautiful words for a beautiful woman with a beautiful spirit.
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A beautiful poem that expresses some traits to be found in the souls of all women, I think. Per your authors notes, you had someone special in mind, but it really speaks to the strength of spirit we all carry and should acknowledge. Very well done
In case I forgot to tell you, this is Thistle with a new name.
Glad I found time to get by and read. Would have hated to have missed this one.
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This is really good!!!!! I really like this one! Tribute poems are some of my favorites, and this one is simply amazing! Keep that pen flowing.
love ya,
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yep, yep yep, that is her alright, you did an amazing job love, and i can see you left LAdy stone speechless keep it flowing, love ya
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this is a beutiful thing and it makes me blush, thank you so much for this, it really is just wow... I am at a loss for words, other thank thank you....
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I'm glad you like it darling
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I am glad to be in such company as yours and Lady Stone, my Mistress! This is a great write to my slave sister! Such a great description of such a strong lady. A quality I hope to pick up from the teachings of you both as you wisk me to.
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