I try in vain
To convince myself that
All I need is a warm body
Comforting arms
Someone to curl up into
Yet of course I know
That the only one who can fulfill me
In the simple act
Of sleeping besides me
Is You
You are my love,
My heart, body and soul
You are my blood
Every day away from you
I suffocate a little
My blood gets thinner.
I'm dying
From long distance
Author notes
blah i havent written in so long...
i miss him so much...
at least he is mine.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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..yes..
I felt this.. alot.
You touched me with this.
Very insightful work.
S
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I am amazed to read your work...Imagination is purely beautiful. Yeah and the rhyming pattern makes the poem just perfect..this is stunningly lovely.
you are such a gifted poet..keep it up. I love and adore this poem, and I think many if not all the readers before agree that this is a very beautiful and well written and a well crafted poem. I like the rhyme and I love the alliteration. This is simply spectacular. I applaud you and I salute you for it. This poem has great imagery, so much description and details. Its incredibly good. you have terrific potential. peace to you always. -
awww this is so sad yet so full of love and life at the same time. short but straight to the point. even tho u may not have written in a while this is a very nice piece! thanx for sharing!
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I like this, it's very emotional but in a good way. Very nice.
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