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up yours (holiday humor) HM

dashing
cross the sky
my toys

dots
on a red suit
cookie crumbs

on the roof
sleigh bells jingle
at the neighbors

milk and cookies
left near the stockings
were very good

my name
is now printed on -
the naughty list

santas hungry
for the milk and cookies
that I ate

that fat man
stole
my slimfast bars

petting the reindeer
on the roof
was insane

wrestling
with santa-
for my toys

next years letter
to santa
“up yours”

 

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  • Deus Proteje
    December 5, 2006

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    Very Cool

    Dove my friend. Christmas is approaching *waits*. Very cool poem, methinks you deserveth to win the contest.


  • Free1977
    December 2, 2006
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    too funny

    Your poem was cute and funny ...Good Luck in the contest...Frances


  • The Poetic Angel
    November 29, 2006

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    sooooo funny !!! i loved it i think coz of the last verse.....
    next years letter
    to santa
    “up yours”
    someone is definatly on the norty list now lmao
    at least im not on alone now xx
    smiles ~cheeky~ x

  • Warrior7
    November 29, 2006

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    Too funny

    Oh Dove this piece made me chuckle, i'm going to help Huntress beat the crap out of him,
    Thanks for the giggle my friend


  • NoWayJo
    November 28, 2006

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    This haiku-chain is the epitome of Naughty List! But I loved the read of each one, and even went back to read it again to catch my favorites--(the missing Slimfast Bars was too cute, but then so were so many others including the milk and cookies that YOU ate)!

    Great haiku-chain and thank you so very much for this entry to the contest!

    Jo


    • FifthDove
      November 28, 2006
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      Hey Jo, thanks, I just couldn't resist
      I've been on that naughty list way too many years hehehe


  • Huntress silver member
    November 28, 2006

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    Funny poem

    stole your slimfast bars, now that is criminal, lets hunt the bastard down and beat him senseless Very cute poem


    • FifthDove
      November 28, 2006
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      lol, I am with you Huntress, I think he'll be at the mall tomorrow


  • invisible-madien
    November 28, 2006

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    that was sooo funny it made me laugh i liked it very much hope you win the contest!!!!

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