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The Girl

It was the night of stormy seas where our treachery begun.1

Seven men afloat with nothing left 2

No matter how hard we struggled, no matter how hard we tried3

Mother Nature could not withdraw her callings4

And soon we left at three5

Suddenly in the midst of mayhem6

I spotted a vision like no other7

A girl dressed in angelic white8

Gestured towards me9

She extended her thin arms and held out my palm10

Blowing into it a warm breeze11

Then she looked into my eyes12

And smiled once more13

Then she kissed me as light as a feather14

And suddenly I found myself washed ashore15

With the other men dead 16

As my life was saved once more17

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