Mirror, Mirror on the wall
Who’s the deadliest of them all?
Is it I?
Or just the reflection of a girl that has lost all hope
Is it I?
Or the girl who to her neck tied a rope
Mirrors don’t always show glamour and vanity
Mirrors show the hurt and the pain
Mirrors are the deadliest weapons of all
There the reason black mascara tears fall
Author notes
Its option number 2.
A contest entry
- mirror mirror on the wall... by bleeding-within.
450 points, ended December 4, 2006, 39 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Very questionable but nicely done. Love the wording but really feel it echoes to much into uncertainty.
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Wow, very deep, even if it only a few lines. the rhyme flows easily off the tongue and the blunt words drive your point home. Thank you for entering this into my contest :]
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Mirror Mirror on the wall
I hate mirror for just that reason they destory you from the inside -
reminds me of that fairy tale.. sad write, congrats on the former trophies... thanks for entering and good luck to you!
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hi i thought this wass very good and i liked reading this and enjoyed it thanks for entering my contest
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Mirror indeed shows reality, when you chooses to look. Nice and soulful hurt. Liked it.
It also gave me a thought on "how Gothic/punk/(and whoever else who uses black mascara) cultures gives tears to people when they reflect about themselves through stigmatized social perspective, which let flow the "pretty mascara" tears"
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Great
This is a great write and I love love love rhyme. I love how you took a mirror and wrote a sad yet reality poem about it. Also, this poem relates to all the young girls out there wanting to be what they see on TV. I loved this poem. Thanks!!!
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i like this poem because it is true someone can see a person in a mirror and see one thing while the other person sees themselves in the same mirror n see something totally different.
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one thing: in the last line, shouldn't it be "they're" instead of "there"?
Other than that, great write! You really got into the essence of mirrors, which I think most of us hate! -
very nice. i can see why its a gold trophy winner.
Thanks for entering -
Awsome!!!
Wow!!! Very good!!!I've taken a look at some of your poems and let me say you are a fantastic writer. I love this poem. Keep writing!!
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I LOVE IT! so short but it holds so much power nice work this is very good
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Mirrors never lie or do they?
congrats on your gold, first off.
This is short and sweet and to the point.
Sounds like it wwas exactly what the judge was looking for so congrats on that. This is one of those poems that seem to have been written quickly and it's fantastic.
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The Best Poem I Read Today!!!
This is sooooo powerful. I love it. Truly amazing. Everything about it.
The NEw Kid
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OMG! wow that was so totally fab (it even made me sound plastic)
but no really the poem was really gd just what i was looking for. Well done in my contest i shall deffinatly remember this one when i am giving out trophies.
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o.o....
wow
dude.
I love this. Whoa...whoa...
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kewlness
This was very good. It was sooo emotional. You portrayed the mirror, mirror on the wall great. Great Write!
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