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Mary had a Little Lamb

Mary had a little lamb
Its fleece as black as coal

And everywhere that Mary went
The lamb was sure to follow

Until one day
Mary went to town

To buy herself
An evening gown

The lamb followed
Unaware of his fate

For this would be
His last trip through town

Across the street Mary went
Followed by the lamb

Across the street Mary went
To the butchers is where she’d go

Back at home
She found her dinnerware
And put on her evening gown

Lifting the top
To the oversized platter

She put a piece of meat
Onto her flowered plate

Mary had a little lamb
For dinner

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Simple but funny - I like the mixed direction you went with this - very intriguing and nicely penned.


  • Hebz
    September 11, 2007

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    Kool, very awesome & Funny...

    I love it so much...

    Thnx alot for entering & Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    HA HA HA HA
    silly little lamb
    could you please put option number in authors notes?
    this was funny
    there is a moral within this
    be careful who you follow
    lol
    a wonderful write
    well done

  • EggnBaconfrier
    November 29, 2006

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    Ugh!

    I think that's kinda evil! Mary loved her little lamb! But, it's funny how mary had a little lamb (for dinner that is)!


  • MaddHattress
    November 29, 2006
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    Hehe, I like it. Its funny. ^-^


  • Darkest-Irene
    November 29, 2006
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    Beautiful

    I love it. It's a new way to look at their relationship!! LOL ~~~~Vixen


  • Dark Magician
    November 29, 2006

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    kewlness

    OMG this was hilarious Wow very creative!!!! I liked this. HAHAHA!!!

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