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But I don't want to hurt

As much as I love having a boyfriend or seeing someone
I hate falling in love
especially if I'm the only one out of the two who does.

It hurts too much
I cry too much
I wish that they would stay so much.

I do really wonder what would I be missing if I didn't fall?
Would I be losing anything at all?
When I fall I do fall deeply
Utterly, truley and completely.

Is love a fair feeling?
Someone allways gets hurt.

We don't get to chose
and as we don't how much do we loose?

How much more can I take?
Why let my heart break?
I don't want to hurt
I really don't want to hurt.

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  • CrazyBeauty
    May 8, 2007

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    great job i love it

    How much more can I take?
    Why let my heart break?
    I don't want to hurt
    I really don't want to hurt.

    this could be a line in a song...fantabulous write..lol


  • Veronica Leigh
    November 28, 2006

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    this is beautiful and so sad. You really let your emotions run in this. I can tell. Beautiful job. Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck!