Love's Fresh Effect

You effect with such subtle
nuance in notion
affection's encounter
to vision and motion,

watching my wave
affect such direction
from distance in facet,

without need to re-arrange
furniture to fable,

or finish my sentence
in daunted intention,

moving me mellow,

in moister, sweet meadow,
to breathe as your blush
this inspiration changing,

crystal word saving
season in clinging

to cover and caress raising wave

in Love's
fresh impression.

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Affect vs. Effect by ea. 300 points, ended November 30, 2006, 4 entries
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November 30, 2006
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thank you for this affectionate piece.

Night Hope
November 28, 2006

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"or finish my sentence in daunted intention, moving me mellow" Sighhh...Yet another prettiful penning from the Sweet Scribe of the Mountains...Lovely sentiments expressed herein, Rich...Good luck in the contest, my dear Friend... Wanda

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