Its true big plants are not allowed
among garden-plants in pot.
But they grow in backyard-
wild with fruits, if cared.
Yet bonsais are in my garden
it may grow wild with fruits
in the backyard, if cared.
But who will care it... ?
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Poem by AshtrayBaby.
2100 points, ended August 22, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [PIF] Anything Contest by brittany.geeze.
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Please tell me what you think
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This reminds me of something from my little book of haikus that I bought a while ago. Your poem is very nice, and thought-provoking. Keep it up!
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beautiful..
i doubt... won't you?
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Nice and powerful poem Ram. It is nice to see such a talent from Indian soil. Great work. I would be happy with your visit to my page to stamp your impressions there dear friend.
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wooooooooooww bonsais r the little pair trees that gorw the litle pairs right???!??????
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THANK U DUCKY
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ultra******
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u are ulta welcom keram
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Brave to be poineer
But Who Will Care? by Kram's poem a step which echo in our mind real favour of a flower and good impression from it with full description of that sight. -
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MOST VALUED
Your comments remain in mind like an everlasting flower
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Very Unique Piece
Short and sweet, well I guess you will be the one who cares...I love the way you explore with the poetic form of your poetry.....write on!...novy
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thank you
such encouraging words ever reminds in mind
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