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I'll be safe tonight

Even when you break my heart
I won't let you see me cry
Even as you crush my world
You will never see my pain
I'll curl up tight
And just close my eyes
I don't need you tonight
As the lullabies turn to sweet tragedies
My heart may be shattered
But you'll never know
At least my teddy with keep me safe tonight
Me&MyTeddy

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  • sidewinder silver member
    December 3, 2006
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    words lost within that silent echo...
    tears have fallen from what could have been....
    but remember maybe someone better is around the corner that will hold you tight
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • BrokenLoversHeart
    December 2, 2006
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    We share a common ground

    I had my heart broken last night when I went to a dance. I wanted to dance with this one guy I liked and he said no, and I don't want to see him again. His loss and my broken heart! I like it! the poem.

  • Galapagos
    November 28, 2006
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    anguish supplemented with self reliance, i enjoyed it


  • bloodlustgirl
    November 27, 2006
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    wow thats really beautiful i love it <3 autumn


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    November 27, 2006

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    A very positive view for a broken heart! i love the streght forward approch in this poem very good. Dolores.

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