Smiles exchanged as the door opens,
A tall figure walks into the room,
gazing...to find prey
as eyes follow to the corner...
a crouching figure.
She pulls me up by my hair,
and spits in my face.
she's upset with me.
My eyes trace her body,
landing at her cleavage
her perfectly round mounds
the smell of lavender and rain
floats to my nose.
i fall to my knees.
She is the most high,
My Mistress,
the one that i live to serve.
Her lips,
her touch
sends shivers down my spine...
i ache to serve.
She gently slides off my shirt,
her hands slightly cold,
touching my back
causing me to jump.
" Shh " she purrs
as she unhooks my bra,
letting it fall to the floor.
My ample breasts hitting the cold air...
My nipples perking instantly.
Her fingers rolling them between soft flesh.
She leans in close.
Her hot breath making my thighs moisten
with anticipation.
" tell me how much you love your Mistress"
i moan and press into her,
her other hand has now traveled to my pants.
The button gently pops off,
to My Mistress' satisfaction,
her lips curl into a bright smile
as my skin is exposed.
On my hip bone is a brand: Worthless piece of Trash, belonging to....
Tess.
She pulls her skirt up and pushes my head into her moistened
woman patch,
bare and shiny.
The smell so enticing;
My tongue slips out
to taste my Mistress' nectar.
She lays down, propped up on many pillows,
gently twirling my hair in her fingers
as i diligently lick and suck at her treasure box.
" Good slut."
" Good bitch."
She says, as my face is coated in a thin layer of her cum.
i am her slave.
Her loving property.
i lay in her arms...
happy in content.
That she calls me hers
And I call her mine.
Author notes
doesn't make sense but my twinsy will hopefully like it.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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holy shit
i really like this. it's so unusual, but stunning!
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Great!
I loved it!
it was good, but i was hoping for more (Like her licking you)
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Interesting
It is definetly differnt. I like it. Whether it made sense to anybody else. I could follow it. With great boldness and passion. And each lined had flare and grat imergery.Providing just enough visual for one to be pleased and arroused. I hope ur friend likes it as well...Great write.
One Love, One Voice, One Life, One Pen
Blessed Little One aka MizzKhaos
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Indeed this is lovely
Im sure your Twinsy loved the fantasies and fun in this one. Nice peice
ephiphany
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wow
thats just hott...
two chicks yeah thats awsome
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yeah I've been known to toy around a few girls in my time.
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okay. i like this one alot.
a] is it two chicks? [that makes everything alot hotter]
b] wow
c] pleeease let it be about two chicks.
i onno why. it just gives a feeling of being about two girls. and i think thats the most beautifulest thing ever.
xxx
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Yeah it's about me and my online Mistress Mariah. It was for a contest.
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wow,ramdom sex may not make sense but i never complain lol well great poem love to read more of your poems good luck with poetr
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u missed a spot on yer chin...heres a handywipe lol
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In the name of all things Sinful.
This is damned good erotica.
There are a few people who can really write good erotica. This is awesome. It makes me wish i could write erotic peices.
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Your Specialty
This kind of write is your specialty. It is erotic and sensual. It displays the master/slave relationship well. I like this. Andy
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Um.. that would be ATTRACTED!*
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Love it!
I confess what attacted me the most to this was Tessarah. LoL After reading it, my opinion is as follows.. full of passion, and erotic imagery. Which I am SURE we have all pictured Tess in such a light. LOL. Thank you for sharing it
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thank you!!
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I like this one. At first I didnt know what to think of it but then I read the rest of it and it was great. I love it just like the rest of them.
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Holy cripes, I don't think a mom should be reading this kind of thing written by her daughter! Ack!
You did a great job with this, Rosita Bonita! I don't agree with or understand the whole master thing and doing mean things to the other one (such as spitting on them), sounds degrading and unhealthy emotionally to me, so that takes away from the read for me personally with imagery, but you did an awesome job bringing out the imagery and there are a lot of parts that are so sexy.
Do you have any erotica that is not master oriented? Just wondering, as I'm sure you do a great job with it, too.
Anyhoo, just came to see what new stuff you have written.
Love you!
Mwah!
Momma Bella
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I love this one it's pretty erotic and it tends to stick in your mind. Great Work! Thank you so much for sharing this piece with me. Best of luck in my contest!!
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Thank you very much! Your comment means alot.
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I LOVE IT I LOVE IT SHES MINE ALL MINE!!!
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You can add to your page
Anything I write for my Miss Twinsy you can post on your page
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wow, kinky. lol
I think you did what was asked, and I hope you win the contest. You got a way to make "kinky" sexy, and I love reading this kind of writting from you. amanda
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Awwwwww Amanda You're a sweetie!!! thank you very much!! do you have any new poems for me to read?
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this is pretty intense. i liked it. could have been a little more descriptive. expressed more emotion, perhaps. but i liked it non the less. good work.
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rofl I had no Idea what I was writing when I wrote this....so I think I might tweak it...
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IM CRIYING!!!!!!!!
OMFG.....IM SO REALLY CRYING RIGHT NOW, im speechless and i feel SO GOD DAMN LOVED! OMFG OMFG OMFG
thats it you should win no hands down
I LOVE MY TWIN
and may i post this on my page
u sexy demon of mine
my heart sinks for you
beautiful Rosita!
i love you sooooooooooooo damn much!!!
tessy mensch!!!
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