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[Life is often confusing]

Life is often confusing
And the path unknown
But friends help you find your way
And let you know you're not alone.

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I know this is a very short poem, if it's even considered a poem, but as you can probably tell, my creativity has run really low as its been a long time since I could even come up with anything. But yeah, anyways... let me know...

It's short, but what do you think?

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  • Ebrehlac
    December 3, 2006
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    This is great!!!

    Yes it's short, but that means you didn't drag it on. It's great like this It has a good message, I give you 2 thumbs and 2 big toes up!


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 2, 2006

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    AMAZING POEM !!!!

    Hello Niki, Your poem says so much with a few lines. Friends have helped me on my darkest days. Friends are the Sunshine of Life. I love your poem. You take care, Love, Sandy

  • luvmestj21
    November 27, 2006
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    this is a really short write but it has so much meaning and truth!! well its true if u have good friends insteed of ones that bring u down anyway.

    • angelic1
      November 27, 2006
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      hey, thanks for the comment, it's been so long since i've been on here, i'm just a little lost lol but thanks again