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(Song) Broken Wings


Falling…
Falling out…
Falling out of the sky
Falling out off the sky, falling from Heaven
Down below I see the ground and the sin that lies beneath me
I can’t stop falling, for my wings are breaking

  Chorus:
My body is falling
My wings are breaking
My lungs are loosing air

My head is shaking
My stomach aching
My heart pounding away

My wings are breaking
Crumbling from my back
Pounds are dropping
Wings are crumbling into pieces
Something in me…is wondering and afraid
What is this feeling
What is this moment of despair?
Why can’t I stop this nonsense now?

Chorus:
My body is falling
My wings are breaking
My lungs are loosing air

My head is shaking
My stomach aching
My heart pounding away

I fall onto the grass
Wishing I had a second chance
But that’s not the way it works
But that’s not the way it works

(Slowly & quietly)
My body is falling
My wings are breaking
My lungs are loosing air

My head is shaking
My stomach aching
My heart pounding away

Falling…
Falling out…
Falling out of the…sky……

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    June 9, 2007

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    Great Job

    I gotta hand it to you. Very well written. This definitely makes a great song. I don't know the melody, but I put my own to it ;-)... lol Keep it up. Gods using you already and He's going to Bless you down the road!!
    God Bless You!!
    Charles


  • PurePassion
    May 6, 2007
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    Wow this is really good! i think you have a spark for lyrics! lol i'm so proud..:-D


  • i love teddybears
    May 3, 2007
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    hey pretty good! you write songs?

  • meredith spitz
    April 10, 2007

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    you told me this:

    please put the your author's page link in your comment box or i have to DQ u and i don't want to do that!
    Abidoodle

    i don't know what you mean when you say this. tell me how!!!!!


  • justrachael
    November 27, 2006
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    Nice.. I really liked and the way i sung it made it sound so good.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 27, 2006
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    Wonderful

    Wow Abi, what sad lyrics you have written. But you have done this so very well. You have shown lots of sad emotions here. Welld Done to you indeed. An excellent write

    Gaylene with love n s

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