flip flop
two sorts of heart
stop.
there is one of the lurching,
fluttery feeling
that has become-
a manifesto-
of being in love.
what is two?
like a heart attack
i would think,
but much shorter.
most unpleseant to experience,
pulses are gone just long enough.
to shoot stunned vibrations
through your systems.
fearful, it becomes the sinsiter sort.
when you just know,
you know something irreversible,
something impendingly awful,
is just waiting to occur.
come to think of it,
the two heart stirrings
are not so different
after all.
Author notes
i wrote this mostly about this wierd heart sensation thing that happened to me at camp this summer. it freaked me out. but yeah it was fine. this is also about how crushes really do end up crushing you for the most part.
this needs work! any ideas??
Comments
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AWWW So Sweet
You probably experienced a panic attack.And that is freaky.Well I just read it again and I can tell you from experience that you had a Panic Attack dear poet.This is the perfect description of one.They are very frightening when you have one because it is almost like having a heart attack.Something happened that you were fearful of that brought it on,even if you were not aware that you were fearful of it.
God Bless
~Cheryl~ -
it makes you think! (thats good)
hey mollie!
well i think this is a really interresting poem. it shows, love can be, and how it can hurt in the end. it is really good and keep on writing. and i will keep on commenting.
good job
christian
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