When grief befalls my fragile soul
And for serenity I strive
I call upon Lemuria
And memories become alive
This continent where golden peace
Has dwelled for countless centuries
Was not just born within my mind’s
Exaggerated fantasies
It once has known its glorious days
Remembered by some ancient souls
Who’d lived in this most sacred land
Accomplishing their peaceful role
It was their classroom where they learned
To raise vibrations of a place
Or sentient beings equally
Allowing flow of Spirit’s Grace
In Healing Temples they would meet
Where sacred chants flowed from their lips
While coloured light would gently flow
From their magnetic fingertips
Some others were engaged in art
In singing, dancing, poetry
This place was perfect paradise
For painters’ coloured symphony
Lush meadows would invite each day
In peacefulness to meditate
Receptive to the babbling brooks
Their soothing sound to contemplate
Thus for their mission they were trained
When once the time would dawn on Earth
Where hate and anger would invade
And righteousness would lose its worth
These times have come, just gaze around
The Earth is crying bitter tears
While slowly loving kindness fades
And while compassion disappears
Yet they returned, those gentle souls
Their ancient promise to fulfill
To reestablish peace on Earth
Each one through his own perfect skill
Could you be one of those beloved
And most delightful noble souls
Who walk this Earth bestowing peace
Accomplishing your sacred goals ?
Author notes
about Lemuria (Mu):
http://www.lemurianconnection.com/en/about-lemuria-telos.htm
the myth of the sunken continent Lemuria resonates deeply within my soul …
I feel that its gift is to guide us to our “Inner Lemuria”, where the promise of a “golden age of peace” to come is replaced with the realization that peace is already present within us … here and now … for it is our innermost nature, our true Self …
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for Gwenevere with love http://allpoetry.com/Gwenevere
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inspired by my poem "Souvenirs Of Lemuria"
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2218739
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painting : "unity" by mario duguay www.marioduguay.com/
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In a list
A contest entry
- Mythology, (With a Twist!) Contest and Creative Writing Workshop by kareneisenlord.
900 points, ended March 16, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I asked all of you for mythology with a twist, and you really socked it to me! I was very impressed by all of your entries, and many of you came up with some really unique and creative material with a different way of applying and perceiving mythology. It was enjoyable reading and I learned a lot from reading all of your fabulous writes.
Because there was such an abundance of excellent entries in this contest, it was difficult to decide which ones would be the final winners. I apologize for taking so long to judge. Ultimately, I went with the material that impressed me and stuck with me the most. What had the greatest influence, insight, oversight, ambience and applied the myth/story in a thought-provoking and interesting way. The entries that were still playing through my mind and echoing with fond recollection, long after first reading them, are the ones that I finally decided upon as the winners.
Objectivity in judging this contest was not my goal, but how each one of you subjectively influenced and moved me through your write. I re-read all of your writes again before my final judgment and relished it thoroughly. You are all gifted with incredible minds and talent. I wished that I could give more than one trophy in each category because certainly there was more than one that deserved it. All of you deserved an honorable mention, at the very least, and I wished I could do this and more. After the winners, the list is not in order of my favorites but most are in the chronological order as they were entered into the contest. I was glad to comment personally on each one of you.
“Heading Towards Hope” - won the gold for me, because it took an uncommon theme in western mythology, deriving the story from eastern mythology, namely Hinduism. The interpretation of this, my favorite Hindu Deity, Ganesh, blew me away, and provided a step forward in my consciousness. I was awed by the profoundness, beauty and humility of this write. While many of your stories moved me deeply, this one actually shifted my consciousness. It contained both meaningful, inspirational and unique applications, written in a purity and sweetness of the heart and soul that is reflected in the words of the poet who wrote it.
Gifts of the Faery, Part II
I awarded Gifts of the Faery, Part II because it reached deep into my sense of profound honor and respect for Nature and all of Creation. Not only did it express stunning wisdom, but it also reflected an eloquent poetic style of it’s own. It is filled with ancient knowledge and powers that are for the Light and bringing humanity to a higher level of hope for the ultimate transformation of humankind and our Earth Mother!
Lemuria's Sacred Contract - Video Slam
Not only is this a beautifully written poem but it struck a chord that resonates far within the innermost essence of my being for I have always felt a special connection to Lemuria and long to be reunited with her. This is my hope for all of humanity, for “Lemuria” or the lost continent of Mu, (the motherland), is analogous with Paradise of earth. She was the original motherland of Atlantis and Egypt. They were her colonies. Lemuria sank beneath the ocean in the world‘s last great worldwide cataclysm. Mu existed in the Pacific ocean, and the Pacific islands, Easter Island and the Hawaiian Islands, are all remnants of her. This was over 20,000 years ago. Many believe that she will rise again, at least in the collective heart and soul of all humanity. This poem described my feelings in a way that I could not do much better myself - a twin reflection of my sentiments and my hope for us all of us!
The Honorable mentions - I will talk about a few of them. Since I commented on all of your entries, you already know how I reacted to your work, but here are a few of the HM’s that I want to give further “honorable mention to“. I wish that I could do so for all of them, but these stood out the most in my mind.
“Kalpa ” won an honorable mention because it reflected an overview of the Cosmos on a grand and astronomical scale. Not only was it eloquently written, but it impressed me with the deeper wisdom and perspective that was reflected therein, by giving one of the most developed and accurate views of the creation of the universe(s) and the dissolution that occurs over and over. It is the Hindu creation myth, that more and more, fits into the most advanced theories of physics and astronomy, (and the Vedic people came to this conclusion thousands of years ago, through spiritual practices!)
Orphee's Heartstrings - expressed the pain and suffering of Orpheus so well.
wow how in the world did i come up with this??? Very clever imagery and it was refreshingly spontaneous.
Sacrifice with Creation - The ancient myth of a god sacrificing himself for the benefit of humanity carried forward to humanity helping humanity!
Gasping - Had beautiful imagery and it reflected the tragic fate of both Narcissus and Echo in such a haunting way
Lost Messiah - struck a chord with me, because it bravely stated how the most important messages of Jesus have been lost, to love ourselves and one another. I think Jesus is quoted to have said, “…love your neighbor as yourself,” among many other references to love. Another one is, “…love the Lord your God with all your heart…”
Lucifer’s Sword - was another really courageous write in that it gave the perspective of the necessity of evil and the role of opposites.
Untitled - was fresh and different. I was hoping that someone would write something based on Chinese legend and mythology. It is beautiful, rich, varied and ancient. This was a good job at tackling this creation myth.
Poisoned Prophesies - impressed me because it expressed the dilemma of a seer.
..With a flying centaur... An exciting and enchanting poem about a mythological creature with wings taking one everywhere and anywhere in the Universe.
The Reflection Looks Back - Was a wonderful interpretation of the Narcissus Myth.
Star Garden - Thought-provoking with a lovely play on words.
Nyquil Dreams - Because who is to say what is the true reality?
"Plus DOCS changent..." - Another great play and twist on the age-old Cinderella story, told from the view point of the Fairy God Mother. Very clever and fun!
Rick Rubens, Prometheus - I liked this one because it was clever and portrays modern day fire-givers.
I could go on and on - and I wish that I could recap all of the entries which I have read over and relished. You were all great and like I said, you all deserved a trophy; every one of you! Thank you for putting all of your creative minds here in the contest for me to savor. All of you is exquisitely and uniquely talented. Keep writing and thinking because not only are you people good poets, many of you are amazing philosophers as well. That means, that you are seekers of the truth. That is what a philosopher does. Blessings!
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thank you so much for your award, karen ... I am very touched and humbled ...
please keep hosting contest with such inspiring subjects ...
much love,
maa
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This is incredibly remarkable! It gave me chills, and I started crying as I read through some of your links. I am overwhelmed, for I too have always felt a special connection to Lemuria and long to be reunited with her.
I felt sad reading through previous comments on this poem, that some have not appreciated the spirituality of it. These are dark times that we live in, when some are not moved by these words you have scripted here.
Well, my dear - you have entered it in the right contest here. It does not fall on deaf ears. Your words have found a home to be admired in. I am so glad that you found me and my contest with this.
I will comment more later, after I finish reading the links that you have provided and probably when the contest is over. This is very exciting. I sent one of your links to my son and daughter. -
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I am delighted to see the amazing work of "synchronicity" ... connecting souls that might have known each other in previous lifetimes, once again here and now ...
thank you so much for your time to read, listen and comment ... and for who you are ...
marion
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Such an uplifting and wonderful write. I so enjoyed reading it. Good luck in my contest
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thank you so much for your warm words, dear theresa ...
much love,
marion
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Your spirit is as elegant as your poem. You always pour your heart and soul into everything you do. Not one word you pen is ever carelessly spoken but written with dynamical force and conviction. Luv, ♥ annabelle
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thank you
thank you, dearest sister, for reassuring me about my poetry. recently, two contest-hosts have informed me that my poetry is "too spiritual" for their taste ...
which is not a problem as such ...
but since this is the only way I can write, I might have to select my contests more carefully, or give up entering contests alltogether ...
I thought that, since I have improved my rhyming, meter and vocabulary a bit, my poems would at least be appreciated for their form, even if the content falls on deaf ears ... but that's not the case.
I might just have to learn to become equally welcoming to praise and blame ...
and to write for the joy of writing and nothing else ...
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I think we all have our niche, mine is nature. I am delighted you have found yours. Your soul, your essence flows poetically as you have a keen spiritual discernment. Your writing has definitely improved over the months (as has mine) and it shows most elegantly--this piece is no exception. I am proud of you for being you and for standing up for you! I luv you bunches and stand in awe of your beauty and wisdom, ♥ Belle
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magic
as past is present, lemuria is already here. thank you, dear maa, for reminding us that what we are looking for is not far away, but just the nearest. speaking about their magic, is speaking about yours and ours. magic is this moment itself, and reading your words really belongs to it!
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thank you
thank you, jm, for your support and always delightful comments. they make me smile ...
and the clapping hands do too ...
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Excellent
Another beautiful serene piece maa and exactly what I was in need of today, it has been a bad week, but your words have calmed me somehow and all feels more peaceful in some way. Wonderfully written with grace and amazing flow. Beautiful rhythm and flow filled with wisdom. I loved it and I wish you the best luck in the contest as always. Bunny
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thank you
thank you so much, my dear bunny, for having sent along the pink rabbit to leave its paw-prints on this page, together with some cheerful claps.
all the best to you,
maa
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Beautiful!
Such a beautiful write with lovely rhyme and flow and such imagination!
Lynda
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thank you
thank you so much, dearest lynda, for your most appreciated visit and your kind words as well as the generous applause ...
maa
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Peace and beauty abound
Sister maa, Beauty, hope and loving peace are hardly narrow subjects. I takes a deep open mind to fully comprehend the magnitude of it all. You are one of the best at putting all there is in poetic form. The poems is technically perfect, but one does not see this as a poem. It is a beautifully flowing story.
Brother Bud
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thank you
thank you, my brother, for your uplifting comment on my poem and for the trinity of clapping hands ...
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maa. I can always be assured of a wonderful read when I see your name.This is just suck an occasion.There is a lot in what WakingDevil said , having said that , as you say it is a deep well to draw fro.And when someone finds a subject they are comfortable with one tends to get their best work.Each piece while having the basis of the same matter always is a fresh look at a different aspect and so does not feel stale Good luck in the contest
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thank you
thank you so much, dear legend, for having taken the time to read and post such a kind and considerate comment on my poem. I truly appreciate your dedication to your task, which you do with so much care and in a selfless spirit.
thank you so much,
maa
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full of beautiful hope
I remember your last poem about Lemuria ! and I remember being in awe of it as it made me think of hope and peace, things which are sooo important to me and belong to this world. I just wish this world would embrace hope and peace instead of pushing them away. You know, I think earth can be quite stubborn sometimes ! I remember that you told me that Lemuria the continent really did exist one time and thats what makes me know that Lemuria isn't quite gone because it lives inside you. Just like Niamh and my Grandda and Nora are not gone because there will always be a place for them in my heart and I won't ever forget them. I love reading about your memories of Lemuria. The desciptions in this poem are so striking and beautiful. Except beautiful is not the right word but I can't think of another 
Do you think you know when you've met one of the noble souls on earth from Lemuria ? lots of luck in the contest and always
love
ellie x
p.s The background/border is breathtaking. All those colours are favourites of mine and together they make such a peaceful special painting !! I wish I understood it fully but for now I will just love it because my eyes and heart do. You are so talented
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noble souls
dear ellie,
I just realized that I forgot to reply to your question about recognizing the noble souls of Lemuria ...
well, I am sure that THEY will recognize themselves !!!
just by resonating with what has been expressed here, the soul will vibrate in a certain way ... it's not so much about appreciating the poem intellectually or liking its form or content ... it's deeper ... a sort of remembering ...
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thank you, my precious angel, for your most appreciated wonderful and magical comment and so kind applause. you always make me happy ...
you're my sunshine.
I love you.
maa
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calmness and peace radiate gracefully from your words...i found this to be so very inspiring.
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thank you so very much for your abundant applause and the sweet words that came with it ... it made me very happy.
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Aim high
Once again, you have given me rest. I have been disturbed for the last day that "righteousness would lose its worth". People have no idea that their bodies, words and thoughts are sacred, and go on polluting them as our planet has been polluted. However, anger and diatribes cannot raise consciousness, only idylls and lovely memories. When we raise our eyes, everything rises.
I enjoyed this, best of luck with it.
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thank you, margaret, for your wonderful visit. I hope that you feel better already ... I can understand you so much ... and feel with you.
your little message made me very happy. and if my humble poem has contributed to uplifting your spirit a tiny bit at a difficult moment, its "mission" is accomplished.
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It's a routtine with you to write on the same subject all the time and yet produce such magnificent writes!How do you think of so many things in such a narrow field?I have an idea.Try writing in subjects you've never written (I beleive you wrote at least one or two fantasy poems for the last season)and enter them in other contests.Develop that and enter the best in my contest
Thanks for entering and best of luck
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thank you for your insightful comment, mark. yes, spirituality might be a narrow field, but it is veeeeeeeeeeery deep. so, while others are exploring the vastness of the surface, I explore the profoundness of the inner realities chacun son boulot (everybody his job 
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but I do appreciate your ideas and suggestions, and don't intend to bore you with all those spiritual poems that I am continuing to invade you with. although I can't help it ... tell a honeybee to produce hamburgers and french fries ...
well, I'm gonna wait for the next challenge - in case that you don't eliminate me right away - and see if I can overcome my mind's limitations.
enjoy your contest in the meantime,
maa
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