Vapid vestiges villify victims
Verbose vigilantes veil vision
Vivid volition violates virginity
Volatile vanity views velocitys vanquish
Dastardly dawn debilitates decadance
Deceiving delicious delicacy
Demented demise demonizes democracy
Denoting denials deplorable depravity
Barbarians baptize binding barriers
Begetting bewildering bias
Blatant bigotry beseeches bondage
Bequething bastardous bedlam
Author notes
This is my first attempt at pure allitteration. I hope everyone likes it.
Explanation:
I focused on society, encompassing everything from terrorism and corrupt world leaders to rape, religion and the controversy surrounding gay marraige.
PS: image credit) Sonnet by chix0r on deviantart.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Options or NO Options, Can you handle it? by IndividualEleven.
1050 points, ended December 8, 2006, 37 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Are you an adept author? ..... Attempt Alliteration by Heavens Child.
700 points, ended September 25, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great now I dont stand a chance in this contest, lol, I remember this write, still should have given you gold.
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lol
Well thank you for the compliment. And for adding me to your favorites. You're sweet.
Hope to speak to you again.
Lady Lilly
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This is quite incredible. Without really going into the depths of describing anything, you've managed to still load it with imagery. I love it. And, to repeat what everyone else has said, your alliteration is impeccable and perfect for this poem. It gives it a balanced flow, and the words all fit together, just as the stanzas fit together. Very, very nice write! :]
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Thank you very much. It was difficult but I found the challenge captivating and rewarding. You should try it sometime. If you do be sure to send me a link so I can read it. I find pure alliteration poems enchanting. Thanks again. Lady Lilly
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The first stanza was brilliant, and it reminded me of the film V for Vendetta. You are obviously great at alliteration - congratulations on a very interesting poem. The way you put your words together (so they make sense!) is great.
And while your poem is wonderful, it's not quite what I was looking for with this contest. Though I thank you for taking the time to enter.
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Dang. You rock at alliterations. I wish I could do that!
This is great. Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing! Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering!
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Thank You!
I'm glad you liked it and thank you for your flattering words. Good luck with your contest, I hope you have many good entries to read. Thank you once again. Lady Lilly
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I would like to say it was awsome but that doesn't even begin to describe the perfection of this poem. Absolutely amazing!! It staggers the imagination and wraps you in a world of metaphsical ecstacy. Well done well done indeed. I applaude you my friend.
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to MasokistikEmpTsHELL
Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it and because your comment made my day I'm gonna go rate it to give you some points. Thank you again and hope we speak later. Lady Lilly
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Very Good
These kinds of poems are *VERY* difficult.
That's why I don't do them.
But this applause is for
you because you did so well.
Thank you
~Ron~
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absolutely amazing alliteration.
-cheers
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xeroabyss
Thank you so much sweetie.
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Absolutely Incredible
this is stunning, exactly what i was looking for, the picture too was very evoking, nicely done, this beginning: Vapid vestiges villify victims
Verbose vigilantes veil vision
Vivid volition violates virginity
Volatile vanity views velocitys vanquish
/WOW, absolutely amazing/ ive done a few of these, not quite a pure one, though its on my list to do, but i know how hard these are, and for that, plus the length that you gave me and the exceptional skill you demostrated in placement of your words, will get you something in my contest, i can't say now, have to wait till end of contest, but dang, this is awsome, thanks for entering, you'll hear more from me. -
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Wow, thank you for your wonderful comment(I say as I blush uncontrolably)lol. It made my day; especially because this is the first of these I've ever done. I guess I sould try to do more of these. lol. Thank you once more and good luck in your contest. I know that with the broad scope your contest covers you're going to have a lot to read and a hard choice on your hands so good luck with that. Maybe we'll talk later, but bye for now. Lady Lilly
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