He tied her hands
Shackled her feet
Lured her to a place
Lead by blind images
He removed her blindfold
She could only see dark
A secret cave indeed
The only thing she could do
Was feel
She felt his hands
Run up her legs
Into her secret spot
She felt his breath
Upon her face
She jumped
The thought of who this man could be
This man who was enjoying her body
As if she was a newly found world
Caressing every inch of her intensity
The only thing she had left
Was the sound of the mans voice
As he ran his finger tips
To the hardness of her breasts
He whispered
The only thing you will remember
After this intense foreplay
Is the beautiful regret
That will lead you to cry at night
She knew he was right
The only thing keeping her from screaming
Was the idea of his hands running lower
Making her want more
What was it that made her squirm
Sweet Seduction
Yes, this is what it was
The fact he had taken her from home
Tied her limbs and such
Had not bothered her for one second
It was the idea of his hands and his breath
She wanted more
So she begged
When she turned around
Her Abductor was gone
No More
© Chantelle Tessmer, All rights reserved
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- Honor of the Neophyte! by Tenshi Asakura.
1100 points, ended July 20, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything by Nam.
900 points, ended August 25, 2007, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Impressive
One of the most impressive erotic/sensual/seductive poems I have read!
Kudos!
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Holy Hell!
I often think like this...is that bad? I loved this...it makes you think...really....I loved it ma....great job....
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Slave - Sparky
And so the darkness reins
Seductress out of place - but within
Satisfactory Slave boundries
Never a whisp of complaint
Hands, lips - the taste of lust
Whispered words - intense and powerful
My captor I must - un-deniably trust
With My Sweet Abducted Seduction
Crying out for more of my Master
All but vanished - But not forgotten
Bold reality hits me leaving a spot of wet
I have no option but to have no regret.
You rein Seductress sparky!!!
Fantastic work...
Love it.
Jeffro -
damn
ohhhhhhh relating the female body to a new found world.. thats intense and very poetic and plus thats quite an esquisite way to look at things. your mind and talent varies in all sorts of wonderful niches and knick knacks ..very addictive poetry and i hope you the best luck in this contest. wow..how she wants more and then he leaves...some mean head
beautiful outstanding job on this one...quite a thriller..and very ummm...hee hee..lets not go there..but you know where im going 
hee hee ~shhhhh!.
wonderful
XOXOXOXOX
mensch!
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i litterally cannot find the words to say to describe how amazing this is. passionate, kinky, absolutely breath taking. great job.
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WOW!
OMG! This makes me wish I was with Holly right now
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sweet seductive foreplay with mystery. very vivid picture painted with the words you chose. very nice job. thanks for your entry.
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awesome
You did a great job Masteress i think its wonderful kinda Dark and Mysterious only adds to the suspense of the Erotisism this poem doesn suck
:He whispered
The only thing you will remember
After this intense foreplay
Is the beautiful regret
That will lead you to cry at night
She knew he was right
The only thing keeping her from screaming
Was the idea of his hands running lower
Making her want more
What was it that made her squirm?: (this was my favorite part of this poem) well done babe -The Sex Toy
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