I sit in class starring
Starring deep into the outside
The view is beautiful
I can see all the way into Vermont
Seeing a place I've never been anywhere near is cruel
I think about the night at Somers Mountain
Seeing your face smile looking at me
The scared look as I pretended I feel off the cliff
The way the sun set behind the surrounding mountains
The way you clinched on to me as we climbed the tower
Then I snap back into it when the teacher asked me to do the problem
I tell him some crap, which I don’t understand, yet is right
Then I try to get the image of us on the mountain
Our first kiss and the first time I said I loved you
Unfourtanly no matter how hard I tried it never came back
Then I went to visit you later that day with a big bouquet
I cried and said I loved you
I told you I was sorry and I never meant for it to happen
To bad you couldn't tell me what you thought
Even if you did I would never hear you for your six feet under
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this poem was an emotional rollarcoaster, it expresses very well how you feel, i'm sorry for your loss. it's a really good peice

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wow the end of this poem hits hard, I really did not see that coming, sorry about the loss
this is a great piece, it is very emotional, good job with it!



