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That One Day


I sit in class starring
Starring deep into the outside
The view is beautiful
I can see all the way into Vermont

Seeing a place I've never been anywhere near is cruel
I think about the night at Somers Mountain
Seeing your face smile looking at me
The scared look as I pretended I feel off the cliff

The way the sun set behind the surrounding mountains
The way you clinched on to me as we climbed the tower
Then I snap back into it when the teacher asked me to do the problem
I tell him some crap, which I don’t understand, yet is right

Then I try to get the image of us on the mountain
Our first kiss and the first time I said I loved you
Unfourtanly no matter how hard I tried it never came back
Then I went to visit you later that day with a big bouquet

I cried and said I loved you
I told you I was sorry and I never meant for it to happen
To bad you couldn't tell me what you thought
Even if you did I would never hear you for your six feet under

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  • BehindTheseEyes
    November 27, 2006

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    this poem was an emotional rollarcoaster, it expresses very well how you feel, i'm sorry for your loss. it's a really good peice


  • Jarrod silver member
    November 27, 2006

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    wow the end of this poem hits hard, I really did not see that coming, sorry about the loss this is a great piece, it is very emotional, good job with it!