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How Dare You?!?

I thought you loved me
for who I am,
not for something I'm not.

I thought you were my friend
and I was yours,
I guess I was wrong.

Friends one day,
and Enemies another,
What? Are we PMS'n?

Time is pulling us away
and making us drift,
Why is this happening???

All these dreadful summers
have tugged us apart,
untill finally, we both snapped.

I don't know you anymore
and it's hurting me inside!
& you don't even seem to care!

You seem to ignore my crys
for you to love me agian,
So what are you shunning me now?

You have a lot of guts
to walk past me everyday,
and not even seem to notice me.

Your killing me inside
little by little, bit by bit,
and you don't even care.

You leave me alone
all by myself,
for some other "friends".

I have to find new friends
because of you,
What am I? An old doll?

You can't keep doing this
to people,
it's not right.

May God have mercy on you
for shunning all those you "love",
I'll pray for you every night.

What happened to my Best Friend?
She left me long ago,
For "newer"& "better" people.

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  • Fallen Innocents
    November 26, 2006

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    Thats very good. I like how in a way it can be related to in life... I should kno. I also like the flow and how everything goes togeather its really good. good job and keep up the good work


  • individuality gold member
    November 26, 2006

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    i think that this a good dark piece of poetry which you have written here with somw style, it is an enjoyable dark poem, and it has a good flow to it. thank you for sharing your poetical talent with us all here at allpoetry, i enjoyed reading it with my eyes. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...