These things I once could see
Now known as mere memories
Locked within a wishful grasp
Beats fading from a clutchful clasp
Crystal drops that quick replace
Smiles once upon the face
Fogged visions of saddened desolation
Solitude in mind's contemplation
Barren of all hope, now lost
Void of feeling at all cost
Complacently numb from head to toe
An abyss of dark, no room to grow
Once up high, now falling down
In desperation's sea to drown
Plead, my soul, to win this fight
And once again, find life's light
In a list
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Why is this so familiar with me? Why do I feel as if I should know what is going on, but I cn't piece it together. This is truly heartbreaking, StormGoddess. I truly hope that whatever dark period you are currently struggling through, that the ray of sunshine will break through and light your path.
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There is more than one meaning to this Cris, and deep inside you know what this is about much more than you probably remember right at the moment. Thank you for your words and support hun.
Storm
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Superb write!
You did a great job with your emotions in this piece. It was so easy to understand and although it was very sad, you wrote one wonderful poem my friend. I'm sure it will help others who are going through tough times as you. My wish for you is that the light will come into your life and blast out every speck of darkness. GBY
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Thank you for your kind comments. They are greatly appreciated.
Storm
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HEARTBREAKING
My Sweet Sis
I am sitting here with tears in my eyes after reading this very sad write of yours and knowing you are going through a shaky time...You wrote from the heart and that is already healing...You are such a beautiful soul and I love you so very much
Take care and remember we are all here for you my sweet sis...
Love ya always
Tes
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Tes my dear,
Thank you so much for your warm words. To have faced many issues within myself in the past is one thing. But when time comes to face the battles that you truly know (and even to an extent, fear.) makes it much harder. I have always been a fighter, but it's getting hard and tiresome.
I have gone back and forth trying to decide if I should post it or not. The battle is that with my life, literally. And I don't know where this path of the journey is going to take me. Nor am I sure I want to know. Each day that I wake, still able to see and get out of bed on my own, I am more thankful that I could express to anyone in any way. What else is left but to take one day at a time, and hope for the best.
Sorry for the run on of rambles and story. Thank you for your kind heart and words.
Hugs
Storm
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goosebumps
so very well written (peeking in my life again eh?)
my love to you
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Thank you for commenting Anne. Just a lot of stuff going on that I have to face, and I'm not really ready to yet.
Storm
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Autumn, I am so sorry to see you feeling this way. But after reading some of the comments and all, I am getting this is not the same things that were bothering you before. What the heck do you mean a battle with your life? Please tell me that you aren't talking junk.
I miss talking with you hon and need to discuss so many things with you. Miss you and love you bunches.
Vickie
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Thank you Vickie. You're right, this isn't the normal shlew of crap that I was dealing with. My health is failing and this just came out, in more ways than one. Love you too sweetie.
Storm
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storm this is well expressed with heartfelt words.
you well expressed your feelings here and I know you will expreince life's light again. God bless
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Thank you for the much appreciated comment.
Storm
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great
As always you have done a great job, I really enjoyed this poem both the rthym and the flow and the message it sends to the reader, great job, Blessings John
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Thank you John, much appreciate your words. Just a battle going on in and with my life right now that I am not sure that light will be there in the end. Only time will tell.
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Well I hope all goes well with your life, and I am sure the light will be there, as you carry it within your heart.
For as the goddess of the storm
You light the skies at night
With the flashing of your bolts
We all here your light
Winds blows hard when you command
Rain in torrents fall
Still The goddess lives in Love
And shares it with us all
John
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hope you feel better really soon and the write was very sad, I know this feel all to well. Really nice write, "find life's light" its always just around the corner.
many hugs
dark
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Thanks hun, I really appreciate the comments. I know a lot can relate in their own way, and sometimes that helps knowing one is not alone.
Hugs
Storm
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This is so me! But I know there is no more light for me. Great writing. Extremely well expressed. Hang in there, you have hope.
Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie. I am sorry you feel so bad right now, but I understand, and I know you get it. This is, though, so much more than what people are really seeing. It's a battle I am not sure I am going to win...Ever!
Storm
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Storm
And find life's light - I hope you do
The abyss of darkness and solitude
No place for a girl like you
Flap your wings - Aim for the sky.
May the moon's rays wrap around you
A comforting hug filled with joy - from above
Helping to search out your internal Peace Dove
you can do it - Just give it a try.
(I really didn't know what else to say)..
Nice write but very sad ...
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Thanks you Jeffro. I know that there is a few ways this could be taken, and though they all become fitting at some point in my life, I am sure most dont realize exactly the depth of this piece for me. But I appreciate the kind words and support.
Storm
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I wish for you brighter days and better times, my sweet friend! Love you muches!
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Thanks Sandy. With my recent ventures in and out of the hospital lately, many times this week, it's just brought me down. Appreciate the comments hun.
Storm
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Barren of all hope, now lost,Void of feeling at all cost, Complacently numb from head to toe, An abyss of dark, no room to grow -
Wow, I've been there a time or two, and recently. A good poem with a good ending. ~~~James
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Thanks James, I am sure we all have. And yeah, mine's recent too. Appreciate the comments.
Storm
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Very nice write babe I hope things get better. Call me soon please. I miss you so much.
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Thanks hun, me too. Just really crappy feeling right now, both physical and mental.
Storm
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The flow of this write was really great along with the emotions that could be felt upon reading.
Wonderfully written and many blessings
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Sad and beautiful
Storm, this is a nice write, full of feeling and sadness. A good simple rhyme that keeps you involved in the read.
I know you'll take your wings again and see the light clearly, sometimes its a struggle but you are not alone. My best wishes reach out to you.
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Thank you Adrian. I guess after time in the hospital and out of commission so to speak, I had lots of time to dwell on the shitty aspects again. But I appreciate your confidence and hugs.
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'Tis not the winning but the willingness to fight
'Tis not for darkness but the drawing of the light
'Tis not for soldiers but to hold their ground
To keep the balance as the cycle turns around
For 'though the fight is never won
it is never truly lost
To keep the shadows on the run
Only cowards count the cost
I have seen you face these demons many times since I came here Storm, for yourself and for others. I know you may be feeling a bit shaky but you are not alone at the wall and I have met few who could match their bravery with you.
Sometimes it seems it overwhelms but patience and planning pay out, even if its not much of either
You know I normally take these sorts of things out of the comments box and post it privately to you but with the new AP I'm not too sure about the message/comments system so I'm keeping them where I write them, hope you don't mind. -
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Thank you so much Adrian, you have no idea how this really helps me. And I never mind your comments, private or public. You speak from deep within and it is often needed.
Hugs
Storm
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