last night i saw a glimpse of my heart
there was a place for each of my beloved
even for you, yet it seems that
your place is chaos, a maelstrom of elements
fire, my burning lust and desire for you
earth, you are my shelter
air, for you are my breath of life
water, sorrow flows through me like tears down my face
my spirit is so broken without you in my life.
as i held this dagger
and whispered what seemed to be
my last goodbyes
all the pain came back to me
i wanted to end my life so badly
and take this pain away
but i remembered that
you used to say you were nothing without me...
is that what you are now?
i guess it's not worth it
i can't end my life for you
you're nothing.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
This is a great poem. I like the first stanza a lot. How you used the elements to describe how feel was a perfect touch.
Blessed Be
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I enjoyed reading this poem , i have nothing bad to say about it because it is very very good!!!! You write beautifuly!!!!
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