My green eyes reflect the smile upon my face.
My modest look veils my ever-flowing curves.
They say my hands are soft, warm, reassuring.
Angel's halo above my dark hair...I think it's slipping.
Behind the good, I'm searching for a hand to hold...
They say the green of my eyes captivate and hold them,
make them smile, laugh, feel loved and happy.
My geen eyes reflect the smile upon my face.
Slim scarlet dresses draw the men a little too near.
They reach out to touch the frame of my body but,
My modest look veils my ever-flowing curves.
I hold every soul dear to my heart, you're all worth it.
They're appreciation is my motivation, I abide for them.
They say my hands are soft, warm, reassuring.
Lately, though I love every soul, I feel lost.
I feel alone, gratitude is received...but where is the love?
Angel's halo above my dark hair...I think it's slipping.
I keep smiling, I keep the people happy around me
still searching from behind my mask of laughter.
Behind the good, I'm searching for a hand to hold.
Author notes
Hey mike this is for you. HOpe you love it. Want me? LoL 
I can't stop smiling now. You have no idea how hard this was to write. 
But I did it for you
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I love the repeat lines, most excellent! Congrats on the gold. sj
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Wow. This is really good. The way you wrote it.. I can't explain.. I just like it.
-Shay
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beautifull
i think this beautifull, it tells a very good story of a nice single girl who is searching for love, i think it is very good and if you keep it up you will get your own book published someday -
Thanks for the comment on "Snapshot." Have I ever shared a pic with you? Which reminds me, your hair looks nice.
The first stanza really pulls me in. It's a very different concept, but well said and interesting. I think the form works well for this also. Is this Udit's form? It reminds me of it if not. I don't think I've seen anything quite like this from you. It's very mature and I think has much more potential than a lot of your other writes. It's like a break through! Well done.
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