Sitting alone, guitar in my hands,
From now on I'm going to take my stand,
And I'll actually be something.
I'll breathe, and see,
That it's going to be the beginning of me.
Found out that I was never by myself,
Just that I was another life.
Let's bring them together and see what happens.
I wonder how it's going to work.
Will there actually be a meaning?
If it does, my world might be worth seeing.
I'll breathe, and see,
That it's going to be the beginning of me.
Take a chance and work it out,
But have a little fun, twist and shout,
And all of them will believe...
I've found my way and won it over,
Found the inside of me..
I've started another path,
I pray it'll go a little farther,
Every day it will..
Maybe a few years later,
Some 'lil girl would speak,
"I'll breathe, and see,
That it's going to be the beginning of me."
Author notes
Wellz.. really this is just the time where you are sitting alone and thinking about your past life. You ifnd out that everything is going to get harder when you proceed in life, so you need to start over and find the real you that will guide yourself through life. So that is the beginning of me...er, you.
Please tell me what you think
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wow
AMAZING job! ♥
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wow
for such a young girl..you do have talent..keep at it..I started writng poetry about 5 years old I never did like it..but it got better..pratcie is good..but heres some advice..try not even thinking about what your writing..it does wonders..trust me...and if you will let me I'll adopt you as my ap ibs sis...but if not then I'll just be an older wiser girl who sometimes can't spell...ha ha...
more advice..keep crazy, never change..try NOT to fit in..and never let ANYONE not even me change you..don't even let a guy change you...stay the way you are...I just wish I had someone older to tell me that when I was your age!
yours trully
the other Darkness
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Thank you very much.
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This is great! It's one of those "insightful" and "inspriational" poems!
GREATNESS!
Happy new year... well... in a few hrs!
"I'll breathe, and see,
That it's going to be the beginning of me"
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Thanks! Happy new year too.
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Thanks! Happy new year too.
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Totally agree. Still haven't found myself, Or my friends. Goth,emo,punk.Prep,poser.geek,nerd. I dunno what to be, To many choices, to many nice people but it seems like you can only hang out with friends that have the same label really sux. This poem is really pretty the rhyming wasnt perfect but hey "practice does not make perfect, Only practice of perfection makes perfect" Lets call it practice of perfection. this poem confused me a bit but all's well. Great poem, Good luck on "the beginning of you" -Mariah.
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terrific
Very good; optimistic I must say. Though the things we like and want to do are helpful, who we are comes from inside us. Even if we don't do anything spectacular and aren't successful we're still somebody because of being alive. Keep living life to the fullest, my friend, Follow your pursuits and dreams and don't give up. Great poem.
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Thank you for the compliment/ comment! Every one helps!
~Gina~
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good poem huh. Its a little weird cuz U have 3 2 3 3 you know what I mean? and also the rymin' and it didn't flow very well. not tryin to be mean. Just tryin to help yah out. U know? Anyways, good luck to your future poems. I mean its never to late to start poetry. I am 15 and just starting to get the hang of it, lol
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Yea the pattern was weird.. o.O. And of course it's not mean! I must say thanks alot because now I have something to improve on my next poems! Thanks!
~Gina~
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