I never knew money could buy love until the day I took my first trip to the strip club. Sitting at the bar listening to music and sipping shot after shots, a beautiful long legged woman in all white with curly hair and coco cola curve slowly stripped around a pole. Just like an eleven year old seeing porn for the first time, I was excited. Indeed she was beautiful. From my corner to center stage, I could see the glitters around her body flickered each time the light made contact with them. Incredible she was; in my thought, I would buy her if she was for sell. After sitting there and watched her danced and danced, we finally made eye contact. I smiled and she smiled back at me like she knew me for years. It didn't take me long to find me next to her.
After sitting there talking for about ten minutes, I asked her what should I do in order to have her dance for me? She replied, " you don't have to do much, a lap dance only costs 20 dollars and for $20, I will dance for you". Okay, I said. We waited until the right song came to play, she took my hand as I followed her like a puppy. She sat me down at a private booth and started dancing on me. As she was dancing, she was touching me all over, my neck, my nipples, my belly button, my head, sucking on my earlobes and plus she had two delicious breasts right in front of my face. They were not too big, perky they were with the size of an orange. I loved them because they too loved me. Anyways, I did not wait for her to tell me to make a move, I soon started to suck on them. As soon as I began to suck on them, our music time elapsed. Now because she had put me in the mood and plus my pants was wet from all the pre-cums, I wanted her even more. What time do you get off I said, "oh well, within the next hour I should be off" she replied. Come home with me and I will pay you $200 for the remaining of your night. Okay she said.
Her shift had finally ended and there I was waiting. She came to me and said, "are you ready"? I've been ready, I was simply waiting on you to come. She got into the car and we drove for over 20 miles. I placed my hands on her tits and her crotch all the way home. We were driving on two lanes as we passionately kissed. When we got home, I grabbed her hand and asked her if she needed anything to drink? "No she said, but a shower would do me good at this time". Okay, I said. I showed her where the bathroom was and there she was showering. As she was in the shower, she called upon my name and said she wouldn't mind some company in there. Okay, I removed all of my clothes and quickly joined her in the shower. There, she softly began to touch me, she started to jerk off my cock, once again, the pre-cums started to fall off. When the shower was over, she asked me what I wanted to do next? I told her come to bed with me. She agreed without hesitation, I loved her for that. As we were on the bed, all of my fantasies came to play. I grabbed her and pushed her to my laps, she was sucking me at a slow pace, up and down. She started talking about how wet her *bunny* was. I took my fingers and slightly ran them throughout her clit. She was gasping, I could tell she was having an orgasm by the way she was shaking and moaning. My dick was solid as a rock, oh man, I wanted her so bad. I took her and shove her on top of me, she started riding me real slow as she gazed into my eyes. I told her that wow, you are amazing. She looked at me and smiled, I told her to turn around into a doggy style position, she agreed as always. I began slamming her juicy *bunny* with my hard rock as I played with her booty hole with my finger. She began moaning even more. I told her about my fantasies, how I wanted to *bunny* a woman in her booty hole. "Really", she said "I'm up for anything".
I began to strike her in her booty hole, she started to make much noise, *bunny* me, *bunny* me she said repeatedly. That was a big turn on for me, I kept on *bunny* her very hard until I was about to bust out. I told her that I was about to *bunny*, she said hold up, she took my gigantic cock and placed it in her mouth. She started sucking me very fast, I started moaning, oh oo, oh ohh, aah, ssps aa a aaa, haa sspss, ssspss, pss. In a very short minute, she had cums all over her. She was so not an every day thing, I called her dream come true. Sometimes we were handcuffed, blindfolded, tied up, playing hide and seek, spinning the bottles, I took my belt and wrapped around her neck, I spanked her, she did not complain, she moaned and moaned. That there drove me insanely wild. That was the most intriguing sex I ever had. After all of these passionate sex and love making, I asked about her life. She told me that she was married and had two kids. I was shocked by such news. I asked her about her relationship, did she like it and where she lived among many other questions asked? Yeah she said, it was gotten close to 5 a.m, I told her it was time for her to go home and when I would I see her again? I Pulled out my wallet and paid her $500. I told her you can let yourself out and call me whenever you feel like it. Okay she said and I went to the bathroom.
When I came back, she was gone. She left me the money and a little note stating that was the best time she had in her life. The week did not go by without her giving me a call. Of course, I respected her relationship, we kept on *bunny*. Every time we *bunny*ed, I come very fast. I guess I got familiar to her body. Miss wild thing, humm, what a woman? Although she did not agree on leaving her husband, we fell in love. We are *bunny* until this day. Her husband does not know, so please, hush, keep your mouth shut. She is my faithful mistress.
Author notes
Mr. Mack
A contest entry
- Sexual Experience by cali951.
300 points, ended May 18, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything take a look by x Bright Eyes x.
575 points, ended June 17, 2007, 124 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dirty..Dirty.. by Cherry Hades.
600 points, ended June 14, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Sex poems ever:Enter as many as you Like i want a 100 by cali951.
1300 points, ended August 18, 2007, 49 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - WeHaveToTakeOurClothesOff by MelissahhMidnite.
300 points, ended September 5, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lonely Lover by Music-Is-My-Sin.
440 points, ended October 11, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Everything Erotica! by Lost-Rose-Petal.
360 points, ended November 22, 2007, 37 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Piss Me Off, Make Me Laugh, Poems that get bashed, etc. by twilight seduction.
1200 points, ended December 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me blush *Adults Only* by sensualbutterfly.
350 points, ended July 28, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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damn that shidd waas hot and sexy..thats real detail..i hope you write more like that
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I thought the story was dirty, I like dirty but I agree with everyone else, Booty hole? bunny? find something sexy and sensual and replace it and this will be even more amazing then it already is.
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Thanks for entering my contest. Although I do have to say the word "bunny" was a little distracting. Thanks again
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booty hole?
really? -
WoW What a story. If true and could be, you r lucky. A great story and would make a good xxx flick.
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I am not old enough to read this stuff Mack! Its ok.
It finally happened to you huh
I am sorry I can't help it... don't mind me
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Sexy sexy sexy....I like this alot, although to be honest...bunny? Seriously, the word bunny? That was distracting, and for me, that word was the wrong choice for a turn-on.
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Great work with this one and congrats on the trophies that you won for it. Good luck to you in all the rest of the contest that you have entered here! I love the storyline and imagery in this. Great job and thanks a lot for sharing it here!
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This is good...but, you're 3rd paragraph is way too big. Break it up a little bit.
Good luck to you & congrats on past trophies
Aden Recreated -
Great write Good luck in the contest congrats on the previously won trophies they were well deserved
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wow!
THat was absolutely amazing!!!!
This is my idea of a perfect story.
Sex turning into love!
The perfect fantasy!
Wow i dont know what else to say other than wow!
Great great great great write!
L-R-P
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I cannot really add you because it's technically a story, not a poem, however, i did enjoy this. I love the idea of that secret relationship and i hope things work out.
Thanks for entering. -
Her husband does not know, so please, hush, keep your mouth shut. She is my faithful mistress.
hmmmm sounds like fun
Riftkin -
Not what I'm really looking for. Ergo, Dirty Pretty.
But interesting all the same. More of a story than an actual poem. -
DAMNNNNNNN
Wow very sexy...I really liked this Mack...Damnnnn I don't even know what to say. This is really good. I love it!!! keep on writing...
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oh man, thats steamy, dancers are so hot
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Well I have read a lot of great poems and I wanted the finalist pick the winners.....now I'm not saying I want you to read every finalist but if you could read some poems and let me know if you think you should win let me know also thansk
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holy shit! man, this made me... gah! haha. good job! wow. good luck and congrats on ur win already! whoo! -claps-
Crimson -
aahhhhh one hot tale, I love it you did a great job at writing this and wooo I need a cold shower now...
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omg that made me horny as fuck!
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Oh My...
Dang...never knew you were such a Freak in Heat...this was so HOT...I got excited just reading it...so, you have a Mistress, huh? Hmmm...yeah we got to talk.
(the rose)
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porning for pyros. this is a crash and burn. needs major overhaul!
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aren't you the lucky guy... wish i could find one of those to bring home and keep for a while.lol my husband would be wowed by reading this, you should get some hi marks on this piece. great job ,,,,,
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Who has the fan?
Okay, this was way too hot. Man you are lucky tho.....
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Hmm..I liked this, but some of it seems kind of forced. It could use some spell check. But mostly it's stuff like "buy" for by. ..Booty hole, really? lol..
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wow..umm that was uhh...wooo its all hot in here..not sure if its dirty pretty and there were alot of spelling errors. but i really liked it. great job!
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wow so much detail if gives you a perfect image in your head thank you for entering and wish you good luck in my contest
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I want to say thanks for everyone that entered my contest it was very hard to judge this contest because the poems were all good and i loved reading them.I had a blast reading them good job and to the people who didnt win you all did a great job.
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I like this poem its so dirty and nasty lol but its still good and i see you didnt have hesitation with the explicit words your bad if this is so tue. I like it though a little too much ut anyways good job you freak lol.
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excellent
You can pay for it anytime. Your tip will be left for you when you get out the shower. Make me want more. -
Hmm
Good story... My emotions on adultrey is one thing that I will not go into , but I will say you have followed the rule of lust and sensuality. Good story.. Good luck in the contest.. Kassie. -
this wasa great write. thank you for your entry into my contest and i wish you well. having to highlight the whole thing so that it can be seen got me. i had no idea of that at all and was about to send a message saying that the write was not there
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Hot!! WOw...this is fantastic stuff!! I also liked how you describ4ed her to have the coca cola curves, funny how thats what a coke bottle used to be modeled from!
AMAZING
Shady
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Hot
This is erotic fantasy, all right. Stripper turning down 5 big ones??? Oh well, it's your fantasy, might as well go all out. This may need a proof read, for spelling and grammar perhaps, LOL. I loved the phrase coca cola curves, the old coke bottles were a fantastic design for holding on to an icy glass. Just never thought of them as femanin, but you're right! Best wishes in the competition. -
Steamy!
Wow that was steamy, your title caught my attention first up Lol, then your adventure lived up to the title
penned in sensual beauty Josephine
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Damn
That is some awesome love making lol.
It made me, well..... ummmm....
Anyways, great write.
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whoot whoot lol turned me on hun...okay this has to be the best porno ive ever read lol just kidding...anyhoo i love ya hun keep writing!!!
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Very interesting piece. I think if you had spaced it out better, it would be easier to read. But all in all it was a nice story and written very well.
Good Job
Soulful Woman
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a good poetic piece here which you have penned, very enjoyable, the flow is really good. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Keep rocking
Wow, hee hee. This is a great story. I think I should take my butt to the strip club to and maybe I will find me something to poke at the end of the night. Lovely work
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Indeed and a write full of lus, love, desire. All of them are mixed up in a bowl and create a tasteful gumbo. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing
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ouch, yummy!!!!
This is a succulent piece of work. It tastes like lobster dip. Man, the strip club could drive one insanely wild indeed. Keep up the amazing work
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Hatian!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope this is story only hhahahahahahha Gotta love the strip club!
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Speechless
So erotica...I loved the storyline...Hmmmm Coca Cola curves great descriptions all throughout the story...Just in plain simple words i loved it. I like all your materials so this isn't new for you....
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