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Field Of Dreams

It was finally mid spring, and school was letting out for the long awaited summer break. I was especially thrilled because I had made it to my fourth year of college, and my parents had promised me a vacation in the country. I rushed home to find my parents waiting eagerly with bags packed and adventure in their eyes. I quickly headed to my room to pack the personal items I knew were dear to me. We left our home and traveled what seemed like forever to a small country town that seemed to have been suspended in time. The clear blue sky played pallet to an array of colorful flowers playing host to dozens of equally colorful butterflies. A gentle southerly breeze blew the aromatic fragrance of this secret garden through out the small town, and into an enchanting forest. The richness of its foliage was tranquil and addictive. We arrived at the Manor in which we were to stay. It belonged to an ex-marine friend of my dads. The Manor was as seductive as the town its self. It was a large, well built abode that looked as if it were brought back from the past. Everything about it from the large door locks, to the intricate brick facing, seemed to be antique. Knocking on the door, we were greeted by a man named William. He was a tall, dark man with a preserved face, an athletic frame and skin washed in honey. Entranced and overwhelmed, I blushed as I heard my dad say 'This is my little girl". Even though I was still a virgin, I did not feel as though I were a little girl. I mean, I've always experimented with my vibrator that I keep hidden in my personal bag. I've used it in college on a regular basis. William immediately introduced his wife and son. His wife was a vibrant, well postured woman with the look of royalty. She had long tailored red hair with rich curly locks. Her eyes were penetrating and seemed to peer into the soul. Her breast were full and firm, as they rose and fell with each breath. Her make up was hand painted on, and her figure was like a dessert made in Heaven. I felt a strange tingle as my breath quickened from the erotic essence in which she emitted. Even my dad paused until my mom cleared her throat. Cassandra was the name of the angel William called his wife. As William introduced his son Justin, I looked up and saw a prince of a man. Justin was my age and had a regal but charming air about himself. He wasn't the athletic build like his father, but with his boyish smile and sensitive eyes, I knew I wanted to be touched by him. Showing us to our rooms, which were upstairs, Justin offered to carry my bags and show me to my room. I accepted, being that my bags were quite heavy, and to make it up that many stairs would have been quite difficult. Justin, upon getting to my room, set my bags down and a buzzing sound came from within my personal bag. Turning red, I rushed him out, saying that I must get some rest, and will be down later. Justin, being a gentleman, pretended not to hear my vibrator going at full speed, and simply said he look forward to showing me around the Manor and town when I am rested. As soon as Justin left, I reached into my personal bag to shut off my secret lover. As I pulled it out, the vibration reminded me of the long erotic sessions that filled and titillated every fiber of my being. As the image of Cassandra came to my mind, I could still feel her eyes piercing my soul as my nipples hardened. I could feel her perfect lips engulf my nipples as her soft warm hands slide down my stomach and into my silk panties. I could feel her gently caressing my virgin cunt, sending waves through out my every nerve. I could not understand these feelings for a woman , nor could I fight them. I thought of her soft wet tongue intertwined with mine as she traced the contour of my breast, my hips, my face, my back and my ass. Walking behind me, she lifts my dress off and brings her soft flesh to mine as her erect nipples pierce my spine. Sucking my neck, one hand pinches my nipples as the other trails down my stomach and parts my moist, begging cunt. I turn around to face her and we both moan as our erect hard nipples touch. As my tongue finds her soft smooth neck, I run one hand down her back to her firm round ass, and the other down the contour of her curved hips to probe hot wet pussy. Kneeling, I spread her shaved pussy and entered her with my tongue, tasting her sweet nectar as her body quivered and submitted. With the thoughts of Cassandra, I picked up my huge golden vibrator, and ran it on my nipples to the center of my breast, down my stomach, along my soft, sensitive thighs to my steaming pussy. As the vibration touched my spur tongue, waves of ecstacy went through out my entire being as I orgasmed in ripples. After resting and a shower, I headed downstairs. Being that we arrived at the Manor in the early morning hours, after we all got acquainted, the day was still young. Justin and I decided to pack a picnic basket before exploring the town. After seeing many of the towns wonders, and hearing of its history, Justin led me onto a well defined trail into the enchanted forest. I was intrigued by him as I listened to his dreams and told him of mine. He listened and gave encouragement as we became comfortable with one another. We had gone quite a ways, but time seemed to fly by. We emerged on a large field of daisies surrounding a pond. The view was breath taking as I began to cry with joy. I had never seen anything like it. Justin held me in his arms, and as I took in the aroma of his cologne, my heart melted. I looked up into his eyes and our lips were drawn to each other in this field of dreams. As I rubbed his chest, his eyes closed. With his strong hands trailing my back, a soft moan escaped my lips. I thought, "what am I going to do? I do not have my vibrator." . Justin whispered into my ear "I come without batteries". I knew my secret was safe with him as we became as one in the field of dreams. As his hands undressed me, my clothes fell to the large blanket that was in the picnic basket. Eager to have his naked flesh in front of me, I then undressed him, kissing his body as I progressed. In awe at a real, naked man, I did not hesitate to touch his nipples. With my hot wet mouth sucking on them, his massive cock stretched out to throb against my stomach. I reached down to feel what I have so often dreamed about, as the stiffness in my hands made the juices run down my thighs. I ran my tongue down his stomach and engulfed his cock into my mouth as he moaned and his body quivered. His thick warm cock was like candy as his hips began to push it in and out of my mouth. I wanted to feel his cock all over me. He turned me around and ran his cock down my back to my ass. Teasing me with his balls, his fingers tweaked my nipples. Now running his tongue down my back, on down my ass and to my thighs, my legs trembled. As he made his way back up, he nibbled on my ass as his fingers spread my virgin clit. No longer able to stand, we faded into the field of dreams as I mounted his face. Taking his huge meaty cock into my mouth, I began to suck every inch of it while squeezing his balls. His long wiggling tongue penetrated my hot wet cunt as his huge fingers entered my ass. I orgasmed. My pussy was on fire as I sucked his balls and his finger probed my ass. I want his cock. I want his big throbbing cock to fuck me and explode in my thirsty virgin pussy. He got on top of me and put his cock into my slippery wet pussy, and the stars fell!! My body rippled, shook, trembled and swallowed his dick whole. I didn't ever want to stop!! I orgasmed over and over again as he pumped deeper and deeper, faster and faster. I grabbed his balls, and his body tightened as he fucked me harder and harder, and suddenly he yelled. Again I orgasmed and we cum together in the field of dreams. We stayed out and watched the sunset after we fucked over and over again. We did not spend the entire spring break at the Manor, but Justin and I visited the field of dreams everyday of my stay. We do not keep in touch, but he will always have a special place in my heart. I a m sure that we will meet again.

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  • Sanshay
    June 22

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    Making love anywhere is exciting, passionate and the quick and hot ones are enticingly so as is this.

  • Je Suis Prete
    January 6, 2007

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    Hmmm...a little long for my taste. The part about fantasizing about the mom seemed so unnecessary. Don't get me wrong, it's hot, but then you move on to the son. I liked how it was sort of sweet and innocent but as it progressed and especially at the end it got more explicit. It's exactly how sex seems to be. Gentle at first but when you both feel the need to let go of everything and just fuck it gets a little wild. Very nice, thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
    Sara

  • Khadidja the Wise
    January 5, 2007
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    This is definitely amazing! The only thing that threw me out of the story was when you used "slang" (for want of a better word) after you started of so dreamily (i.e. "fuck" etc.) It just doesn't always go with you otherwise wonderfully flowing story.


  • Mackie
    December 7, 2006
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    wow, tasty. No wonder why I did not win. congratulation. marvelous piece

    • In Too Deep1 gold member
      December 10, 2006
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      Thank you

      I have begun reading your work and really enjoy your pieces as well.

  • TommyTRASH
    December 2, 2006
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    Hot

    Amazing!!! This is great stuff!! Very well done!! Wow, HOT AS!!! lol.

    Shady


    • In Too Deep1 gold member
      December 2, 2006
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      WOW!

      Thank you!! I was so happy to hear that you have enjoyed this piece. It is the first of a series involving a young woman and her adventures and self discovery of her sensuality. You have made my day.!
      Thank you

      Jason

  • Heavenly Angel
    November 28, 2006

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    Wow! You've stunned me yet again! Very hot, very passionate, and so very well done! All the best to you in this contest!

    • In Too Deep1 gold member
      November 28, 2006
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      Thank you Heavenly!

      I am delighted to get such a review from a poetess as talented as you are. It means a lot to me.
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