Break the pool
Where is the moon?
Break the mirror
Where is the face?
Break the vase
Where is the space?
Break the bulb
Where is the light?
Break the self
Where is the Self?
Janaka says:
Could one finger grab itself?
Author notes
Option n° 2
DK Aka Lunatic Serene
Inspired by the poem "Echoes and reflections" on the contest page
In a list
A contest entry
- Echoes and Reflections by DK akaLunaticSerene.
700 points, ended January 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Intriging
The final line is certainly a kicker, thought provoking to say the least! Thanks for this great entry, and good luck!
xxoo
dk
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Truth seen and shared
Looking always speaks to me of intention, expectation. Seeing is simply a matter of Awareness. Can an eye see itself directly? That Which Is can only see Itself reflected through this image, "I Am", we call the UniVerse.
Well spoken, brother.
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thank you, dear myrddin. homage to Oneness.
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yay
yay !
your first poem after three month !
welcome back to the world of poetry !
I just love your poems - they give no food to the mind at all, but always push the reader to transcend any believes and views he might have kept dear so far ...
thank you, breaker of the mirror !
maa
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Yes!
Bend it in half at the middle knuckle! I am chuckling...thinking of the quintessential road trip battle of the siblings..."he's touching me! he's touching me!" Anyway, well done, and thanks for entering! Good Luck!
xxoo
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dear dk, thank you for your kind welcome and comment! and also thank you for such an opportunity to deepen the questions of reflections and source: reflecting what? reflecting whom? where is the hidden I ?
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