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At The End of The Day

With every passing moment
a song of forever with every lying breath
In the end we all smell of death
Only one way to go.

So if I'm destined for this loneliness
I'll live it out in glorious spectacles
You know I was born to be a star.

Stare into the darkness
it tells you of the time you'll never have
Oh, well isn't it sad.
You won't know.

Time is standing still
but I'm in control.
& clueless as I was before.

Author notes

I so don't even know. I haven't written in forever and this is pretty much for Danny 'cause he wanted me to write something. Mlah. Be happy Danny. I just started writing and this nonsense mumbo jumbo is what happened.

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  • BreakingxThexHabit
    May 26, 2007

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    I haven't commented you in forever! How have you been hun? You probably don't remember me, but this poem was amazing and for some reason it hit me hard. lovely poem =]
    <3 Isabel


  • livingItup
    February 27, 2007

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    hey
    lol i love this. a cute random piece. always something interesting to read. it seems like a "im going to break out an win!" write. keep it up. ♥


  • Sergeant Awesome
    November 26, 2006

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    It was actually pretty good for a bunch of random mumbo jumbo. Nice Job jessie. Te queiro chica! lol


  • skye disguised
    November 26, 2006
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    i like it its rather good...yes

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