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Tee-Hee



Tee-hee.
He’s cute.
Like, totally cute.

Ohmygod. 
You honest to god
Don’t know who I’m
*sigh*
Talking about?
Well, he’s cute.

His eyes,
Yeah,
His eyes.
*sigh*
They seem to glitter
Light up with
With
I dunno.
They’re awesome.
They’re like moonless nights
Under dark forests
Where you’re that
beautiful princess in distress.
And there’s evil men
Ready to…
I dunno.
Do something bad.
Hmmm
I wish I was the
Moon in his eyes.

Wow…
All those words.
Trust me, girl,
You’d just have to see him.
To gaze into
Is moon-less night eyes
To see his wild
Dark hair.
Hair like…
Blackish brownish
Dead ivy.
Or those beautiful
Vines that trap.
It’s tousled,
Kinda,
It makes him look wild,
Feral.
Like a criminal
Ready to steal
Or do something bad
To the beautiful princess
While those moonless
Night eyes watch on.

His face is gorgeous.
Like, totally gorgeous.
His nose is,
Tee-hee
Perfect.
His chin is strong
Jutting out like,
I dunno,
Something strong.
A boulder in that forest
Where the distraught,
Beautiful princess,
Tee-hee,
Me,
Has to hide behind,
Or trip over,
Falling,
And ripping my dress fetchingly.
All the while,
His moonless eyes watch on.

Oh gods! 
He’s so handsome!
I wish you could see him!

He’s so dashing.
He’s built rather strong
Like those ghoulish
Nightmare trees
Who’s branches grab
That beautiful princess
Scratching her face
And mussing her hair
As she runs past,
Distraughtly fleeing
From the men who’d…
Do something bad.
While his black
Moon-less
Soul-less
Eyes watch on.

Tee-hee.
I wouldn’t mind
Being that beautiful princess

Author notes

This poem was written in an act of utter annoyance. In my Creative Writing course, I had read one too many crappy love poems. This was my response.

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Comments

  • Edge of Dreams
    November 26, 2006
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    A clever mockery. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

  • EmeraldDaze
    November 26, 2006

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    Wow, I know what you mean. All those love poems are crazy. Your poem is the perfect antidote for all those sickening love poems that aren't all that great. Thanks for this truly refreshing poem.

  • Blue-Skies
    November 25, 2006
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    Hooray!!!! Utterly perfect. . . I was kinda scared for a moment when I saw this, since it doesn't seem to fit your personality or anything else you've written. . . but would a dumb blond know the word "feral"? I dunno.