They say I'll go to hell for this
But I can't help it
I can't resist her
She's my secret
I know she's hates me for that name
But, I'm so scared to let my feelings known
My parents, my friends, my everything
How would they react
She's so beautiful
I want to always be with her
Her smell, so intoxicating
Her words, are always what I need to hear
Her mind, is just beautiful
I want to be able to share all of me with her
My loves with each passing day
My body says another
My head is filled with thoughts of only her
Too bad she's my secret
Even from her
Because she doesn't even know how I feel
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I love you babe!
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- The Love For A Girl by Ignis Corpus.
385 points, ended June 10, 2007, 22 entries
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wow that is beautiful, my favorite part is
"She's so beautiful
I want to always be with her
Her smell, so intoxicating
Her words, are always what I need to hear
Her mind, is just beautiful
I want to be able to share all of me with her
My loves with each passing day
My body says another
My head is filled with thoughts of only her
just exactly what i was looking for, good luck in my contest, -
ik ik
thats...so...true...i've felt it and it doesnt feel nice the feeling that you love someone with such a passion and you cant even share it. not with your friends, not with your parents, not even with that person. and it burdens your mind to the point that you cant take it anymore that you start to seal it inside a vault of feelings waiting to pounce out like panther. you need to be with that person but you know you cant you need to talk to them but you cant. and sometimes you need to kiss and hold that person but you cant. that feeling sucks. good luck and i hope you will acheive what you think you cant have. which is not true you can have anything you want you just need to know the right way to aproach it.
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i understand
i dont' really know what to say only follow your heart and have fun in life. and yes i know it's easier to say it rather than do it so good luck with whatever you choose to do
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*weeps*
tis beautiful im so glad that you shared *weeps* so wonderful and yet so sad to know that you can't even tell her. you poor dear!
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