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My Hot, Glistening Thighs (a 10 min clunker)




"Then, we shall have to grab a coffee, first..." she had said.
And the anticipation was overwhelming!
There are certain... advantages to playing with a woman who
has just had several sips of near boiling water in her mouth...

To expedite things, I careened through the drive-through
at break neck speed, throwing money at the pimply-faced teen
not caring to see the change, as time was precious...

The intimacy that followed is going to be legendary
as it is retold and retold in lore,
of how our morning of love became
the morning she applied ointment to the coffee burns
on my hot, glistening thighs

Author notes

From a title supplied by my buddy in badness, Honey Bear - her title was, "Naked Woman in the Mirror" if you should like to check out her answer.

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  • Lullabyhaven
    November 25, 2006

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    TOO GOOD

    I mean this rocked...though laid on thick and hot,
    it was what it was, and was not, what it was not. I got a grand laugh from this one. You have found your
    unique niche...smile.


  • Fire N Ice
    November 25, 2006
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    Fun and light hearted, another great write here Al

  • honey bear
    November 25, 2006
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    love it!

    ha ha ha great work ahh... a little hot and cold treatment..you are naughty for telling everyone that i gave you that title (as if i would )
    great fun write,do you think it should be in adult humor?