When drab, dismal night set in at last,
With brightest of its darkest face,
When departure didn't display ugly spasm,
When she stared in uncertain tears,
Still I could wipe jewels flowing fom her eyes,
Still I could show her ray of hope,
Still dreams had shattered, though not vanished at all,
Still she was mine, and I was her......
Yes, I assured her tomorrow will come,
With brighter sun carrying more pageant rays,
Yes, moonlit would sprinkle more beauty and mirth,
And breeze would spread more fragrant flowers.
She cried and moaned and grieved in full,
She knew that end of love at hand,
She looked at me with empty woes,
Oh yes I witnessed the fading Rose!
Then embraced me she met bosom warm,
Aah...in the world i found no charm,
May you live long, and see no harm,
May not fall ill, added she while kissing my arm.
I thought many times that tommorow would come,
When we the two make a beautiful home,
When separation would end, disappear roam,
Drawing silly dreams on sandy sea foam...
But she was right, her words were true,
Her broken heart called me o beau,
Let all illusion please bid adieu,
Thus quit the beauty in cries, in hue.
Time never took long waited turn,
Neither could we manage any chance to meet,
The burning hearts all sweet dreams burnt,
Tomorrow never came, till withered heart beat.
Please tell me what you think
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Salam my friend, this was an enchanting read...the end of your love story is sad...you really expressed yourself beautifully..good luck
AJ
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Many thanks!
My kind friend!..Your precious words always serve as fresh sway of breeze!!!..I pay my thanks to you!
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wow, beautiful and heart melting poem is it dear mujtaba. i am impressed -
miserable
Wonderful..your poem is very beautiful but reveals sad end of your love.
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Sweet but painful
Bhai Zaidi
How sad you penned this one! May tomorrow and tomorrows of you and your beloved be brightening and shining! Your words smell a deep love and were blended with death, too. In company with you, your beloved won’t have any fear of tomorrows that might never come.
Thank you for penning another brilliant poem and all the best in the contest :-)
~Massy~
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Thank you very much
Your so kind words are source of permanent encouragement for me...May Almighty Allah bless you (aamen).
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please tell me did u never meet her again in life??? -
wow! how beautifully u portrayed the tragedy. i am in tears mujtaba h zaidi
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Very sorrowful and pathetic ...weldone.
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Great
You have revealed your grief and intesity of love very skillfully. I really love this poem
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