Oh, sweet neverending love,
I dreamt of you in life,
But never did I think I'd have you.
Oh, gentle loving eyes,
Once did I read your thoughts
But never did I read the ones of me
Oh, amazing caring arms,
I felt your warmth in sleep,
But never did I think I'd feel them for real.
Oh, undeserving heart,
Once I thought I'd never have you
But here you are with me.
Oh, cold selfish soul,
All the times I tried to make you see
But finally your affection took place
Oh, torn & worn away love,
I once never thought I'd fix you,
But here you are put together in my arms.
Oh, heavenly bliss,
I once never felt anything but numbness
But you have taught me to feel again.
Oh, splendid remorse,
Never once did I feel you would forgive me,
But here you are wiping away the black tears.
Oh, succulant compassion,
Once I thought you would be no more,
But here you are.
Mine.
Forever.
In life & In death.
To the end.
Author notes
The First Verse:Represents me; How I never thought I could ever find the love my boyfriend has given me
The Second Verse:Represents him; How he felt when I treated him so poorly and I wouldn't see how he really felt about me when I just walked all over him
The Third Verse:Reprsents Me & Him 
Our emotions intertwined together.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like how it flows from bad to good to the ending where you guys became like one and loved eachother so much. nice poem
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wow this is a really good write and i loved reading it, it is so sweet and has so much emotion it obviously came from the heart and i admire this piece for that. you are a great writer and should keep it up. i cant wait to read many more of ur pieces tash.
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