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.[.x.].

I see the past darling, it's heavy on your mind

it's been such a long time, and our words have faded

this isn't a tragic love story

[till someone gets hurt]

If I had a gun, I'd load it

and shoot her right between the fucking eyes.

failure leaves such a bitter taste in my mouth,

where the walls I built are crashing down,

crashing down hard on me. [hard on me]


Drowning me in your own cries... well, if you think you're useless, look at me. I've been chasing after you all this time and I'm just a number in your address book...and if you think you're desperate for a happy ending with her, you have no fucking idea what desperate is.

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  • Kreg
    March 2, 2007
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    violence not into it


  • MessedupMarionette
    January 14, 2007

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    cheers

    I agree with Bailey, though--a bit emo. Although you seem to have a good idea what you're saying, and you say it well enough.

    Rock yo ass on.


  • Street Spirit
    November 25, 2006
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    brava

    hola sweetie... I have to say, i think it's a wee bit emo-depression-ish... But then, we've all writen those. I still do every once in a while too. It's definitely honest, and comeing straight and unfiltered from your mind, and that's what i like about it. pretty good write, but you've done better.

  • looslipsXOsinkships
    November 24, 2006

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    fuck yes

    that is all that needs to be said.

    one of my favourites

    hearts <3 XO