when your lost
you want to be found
no matter what it cost
when your scared
you want to be safe
so someone cared
when your mad
you want to feel happy
even when you were sad
when your alone
you want to be with someone
even if ther gone
when your dieing
you want to be living
so you can stop your crieing
when your dead
you want to be alive
so no one finds your body on the bed
Please tell me what you think
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this is an awesome poem keep up the good work jess
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this was a wonderful poem jess. i love it. it has a lot of emotion in it. you've come a long way from your first poem. you are truly a remarkable writer. keep writing.
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awsome
wow, you can right poetry alot better than i ever could. well I hope you know that when your scared i will allways be there to keep you safe even tifnie will be there, me and tif will drive to the ends of the earth just to keep you safe. well got to go now. Stay out of trouble. I LOVE YOU
Tyler -
cute, touching and sad, very good
ehhee its just ever pretty my favourite style
great write
keep it up
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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cute, touching and sad, very good
oh I liked this a lot. it was cute, touching, sad, actually a whole range of emotions. It is so profound and yet simple. You really did a good job with this one.
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