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what you did to me

you told me you loved me
but you didnt
you said it was ment to be
but it wasnt

now im crieing
tears running like streems
im slowly dieing
of a broken heart is what it seems

now im dead
never to live
they found me in my bed
i have nothing left to give

you killed me
i loved you
couldnt you see
but all you said was boo-hoo

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  • sad angel 777
    July 31, 2007

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    this is so sad i miss our conversations we used to have i need to let it out again i cant write my poems cause everyone reads them and asks me and all this shit i'm so sick of it

  • Aprils Baby
    March 27, 2007
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    why

    who the hell did this to you, i will rock there minds, and drill there heads into the football field, and have the georgia bulldogs and florida gators, kick his ass until his head is know longer popen out of the ground. as long as im around nobody will ever hurt you, remember that.


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    November 24, 2006
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    hey jess this is really good. great write.