The woman stood towering above me
She smiled wickedly as the baby was placed into her arms
The baby cried as soon as she was touched
The woman had no name but Morgan seemed to fit
To me Morgan tossed the baby and ordered me to care for it
In my head I named the baby Alexis
Alexis seemed frightened but happy to be out of Morgan's arms
I decided to take the baby away from Morgans evil wrath
I jumped into the lake beside her house
Wadding through the water I lifted the baby so she wouldn't get wet
Morgan talked to the soldiers who had placed Alexis in her care
A boy came to meet me he he looked like someone from a commercial I had seen
i could tell he was Alexis brother
Holding his sword with confidence he led me through the maze
Dementor from harry Potter and old bald guys in sweat suits and sneakers attacked us
One slash to the foot made them disappear
They kept coming and coming too many for me to fight
The boy yelled for me close the door so no more could come in
We continued to the maze to a room
In the middle of the was a circle like the ones in a video game I played
By the circle was a man ready to jump on the circle to make the platform fall
Again dementors and old mans began to swarm into the room
For fifteen minutes I fought with the boy's baby sister Alexis still in my arms
Again the boy yelled for me to shut the door
I fought till one old man left for me to defeat
He was fast and his feet didn't hit the floor
The man and the boy watched me chase him
I slashed my fingernail on his shoes but he still wouldn't disappear
Anger boiled inside causing me to jump on the old man's head
I stomped and stomped till his skull was cracked
Blood lay in puddle beneath my feet. The boy took Alexis as I began to shake
Terror over came me from the image of what I'd done
The platform began to fall but I decided I could take no more
I woke from this terrible dream the picture of blood still in my head
I never forgot this dream because of the image it left
Author notes
I had this dream last night For some reason through most of the dream I was the servant who sometimes looked like me and sometimes looked like a skeleton of a man wearing rags and a look of fear. I had this dream when i first saw Erogon commercial. Probably because the boy in my dream was erogon though I didn't know it. It's not a dream from the movie because I've never seen the movie. And the boy reminded me of peter pan for some reason. Not the animated on.
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Wow... that is an interesting dream. I like the detail you remember about it... I wonder what brought that on? Thank you for sharing and adding an explanation in the author's notes.
Good luck.
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Intresting take. Great imagery and a really good portrayal of a dream.
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To me the “school” dreams always seem to have a lot of left-over emotion that’s lasts for weeks or even longer (years). I don’t know the meaning of this dream but it did bring back the memory of some of my own school dreams, nice work on this. Thank you very much for taking the time to write for` and enter my contest. Best wishes, Dove
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jiill
that is so funny how you actully had this dream.lol. I thinnk this poem is so funny. loved it. good lick in the contest
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