Allpoetry is a haven for me
To write my poetry
When I'm upset
I love the feeling
Of supporters
That take away your regret
This site is a part of me
I need it to survive
I need it to live and thrive
Without the love and support
The viewers of my poems bring
I would hibernate untill the spring
When people comment on my poems
It means so much to me
Allpoetry is almost like a second family for me
It makes me express myself
Basically, it's the only place I'm able to
Tonight I give a big thankfull shoutout
Happy Birthday to you!!!
A contest entry
- Ages 13 & Under ONLY - Special Birthday Bash for Amunet Wolfbane! by Amunet Wolfbane.
875 points, ended December 11, 2006, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I agree wholeheartedly with what you've written here! AP is definitely a haven for me, truly a second family, and the only place where I can express myself to my desire. In this poem, there's a lot that most of us on here can relate to, I think. You've done an awesome job with this!
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awesome
wow this is really cool.
good luck and all of that in this contest
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I think this is the best entry in the contest. Good luck, and peace out.
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Awesome piece! So glad to know you find AP a haven. Many of us do. Well written. Thanks so much
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The is GREAT
Wow Thanks for the birthday wish. I'm very happy to know that you enjoy writing and Allpoetry. I think that has been one of the key factors why I've stayed here so long. It really does feel like another family, one that encourages and understands. Because we are all writers, all human and we should support each other
Fabulous write here!
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very good
Very nice. I'm glad you enjoy AP. I've been here almost two years and though I've had some run ins with some users in the past, I have no regrets, I've found great family here which keeps me going wanting me to write more and more. I hope you'll continue enjoying it. May you continue writing and finding more and mroe friends in the process. Thanks for sharing this. Great job.
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lmao happy birthday? haha nice gabs. cute poem. i used to feel like this, but my style's matured a little since then. keep writing, and you'll be surprised at ur improvment. *NOT THAT ITS BAD NOW CUZ UR A REALLY GOOD WRITER =]* but yea just read a few of my first poems and ull no wut i mean. lol
lylas,
mandaaa
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