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I Need Your Love

When I was darkness at that time
My lips are trembling
and I cry in the corner of the room
The more I struggle, the more this wound pierces
The broken promises hurt me

Nobody can save me
There is just one God
It seems like my love stops and tears me

I need your love. I'm a broken rose.
Your song is the sadness that falls down
My lonely life with nowhere to go
I need your love. I'm a broken rose.
Oh baby, help me from frozen pain
with your smile, your eyes,
and sing me, just for me

I wanna need your love...
I'm a broken rose
I wanna need your love...

When you are with me at that time
I chase after your shadow
and ran through it barefoot; stop me
The more I block it, the more this love gets complicated
Kiss me gently, tenderly

Nobody can save me
Like a frozen rose
I want to sleep gently; my tears

I need your love. I'm a broken rose.
My sad soul dies off
I'm a little girl that breaks down
I need your love. I'm a broken rose.
Oh baby, help me from frozen pain
with your smile, your eyes,
and sing me, just for me

I wanna need your love...
I'm a broken rose
I wanna need your love..

Author notes

Another one that was originally is japanese. Its a song and I think it BEST describes what Im going through right now without saying it point blank...

I Need His Love...

I want to see how well I can play this song.

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  • Crystal Ellens
    August 9, 2007
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    So full of emotion, It is a beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading your work