bright moon beams down
through the clouds onto earth's stage
spotlights lovers.
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Written May 11th, 2003
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A contest entry
- Luna by torn dragonfly.
300 points, ended March 1, 2006, 18 entries
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The moon is certainly a n excellent prop fpr lovers.there is nothing quite like strolling on a moonlit night with your loved one, Ros
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ready, camera, action! So much is said in small profounds of space such as this. Nice ditty!
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Awwww...so short and so sweet. i totally love this poem. i am a peron for the moon and the stars so this is very nice and sweet to me. keep it up. JesusLoves You!!
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Very nice write!!!!
Sounds like the perfect summers evening! ~Laura
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Short and very eloquent. I really can picture it. Thou, I don't understand much about Haiku poetry, as yet. Currently studying it. Thanks for the read. rosewishes for endymion
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