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Love me not

Why, I don't understand
This feeling is odd to me
I know it wasn't planned
It wasn't plain to see

What is it that draws you
I don't get it at all
I'm different, that's true
Don't even answer when you call

Yet here thinking about it
I get a smile on my face
Not understanding even a bit
"Noli me tangere"? This is the chase

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  • Kaleidoscope Eyes
    December 4, 2006
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    Cryptic in its brevity. The reader doesn't quite know what's going on --- but then neither does the protagonist. We are together left wondering. I suppose this is what the poem is about - not understanding, or misunderstanding.


  • Drewce
    November 25, 2006
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    Cool

    Hey good write here!!!Its me Andrew. I have a computer of my own for the first time and I'll be getting on here quite often now. Its good to be reading your poems again. It has been almost two years! Great stuff!!!