to hard to be
to late to see
to good for words
to sweet for nerds
to forgetful to think
to understanding to blink
to nice to be bad
to soon for a young lad
to pretty to be nice
to ugly for lice
to hard to be
to late to see
Please tell me what you think
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sorry but...
This made no sense what so ever!!
You DO know that not ALL poems rhyme.. right? I thought you'd catch on by now, but apparently not. And you used the wrong "to"... it's supposed to be "too" (Grammer lesson: too- also, or a lot[too much])
You can't evolve your emotions around rhyming words. That's not how it works. It insulted me, that something that I feel every day can be displayed in this way.
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Uggg!!!!!!
Who cares about grammar. Yes not all poems ryhm but my cousin and I had just started writing poetry for the first time ever and we were just throwing together whatever we could think of no matter how little sense it made. Some people just need to write about how they feel even if it doesn't make sense to anybody but themselves.
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I don't think it makes any sense. work on the meaning you shouldn't make pointless words. Not your best work sorry.
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ya i know i guess that is what happens when i just try to come up with things that rhyme and dont think about the moral of the story i will take your advice and make more sence out of my poems.
thanks
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