Blanket of Love by Celticmoon at All poetry

Today, I take you

in a way like never before.

I take you as you are; as the threads

when stitched together

make me whole.

You are my

courage when I can fight

no more; and my voice of quiet

reason when my mind

screams in silent

chaos.

When a river flows

from passionate gems you

are the secure comfort I seek. In the

night when fear attacks you are

my knight of valor.

All that you are

is an extension of me.

Torn apart at the seams only

to be rewoven together

once again.

So fine and delicate,

I shall handle you with care.

One by one, and strand by strand

today we weave a blanket

of love divine.

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Star Shine
April 15, 2007

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I love the metaphors and allusion to the interweaving of beings. The first verse is my favorite. Thank you for entering this lovely piece.
DenyMyLove
March 10, 2007

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Awwwwwwwwww!!!! Sweet, romantic, absolutly beautiful!!!! Very well written!!!! Good luck in the contest!!!!
~DAWN~
lucy sky-diamond
February 22, 2007

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this is a very beautiful piece, such alot of lovely emotion, i wish you best of luck in the contest
tawk
February 22, 2007

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Wow this is beautiful and so full of love and emotion. You have painted such wonderful picture of love for each other. Good luck in my contest
hose30
February 9, 2007

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Beautiful
I think this is lovely.The emotion were so heartfelt.The message was divine.I wish you well in this contest.
honey bear
February 2, 2007

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thank you for entering this very wonderful write, good luck in the contest this is yet another beautiful, love filled write
Vickie J
February 2, 2007

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Wow, this poem is in several contest. I'm sure it will do well in them all. Who wouldn't feel special after having such wonderful things attributed to them. Stunning!~
Entwining Beauty
February 1, 2007

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oh wow what can i say this is simpley beautiful background and picture are just grand together wording of your poem is amazing loved it thank you for entering my contest
Miss Faerie
January 16, 2007
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This is a beautiful piece. The flow of the words that roll off your tongue is amazing. I love the use of punctuation, and the hint of rhyme that gave this a melody...
Thank you for entering and good luck
aeri
ShaShay
January 14, 2007

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Excellente!
I love the feel of your poetry, it always makes me feel good to read it and wish I could find the muse that makes me feel like writing this way again. Pen on...maybe its contagious.
the Angel in Hell
January 13, 2007
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great
I love this write, its beautifully writen. good luck
Virgoan
December 18, 2006

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A cery beautiful write. The spectacle of love is very much crafted in the images of words.

Lines worth remembering:

shall handle you with care.

One by one, and strand by strand

today we weave a blanket

of love divine.

In line with the contest, the realization that the poem states gives us the awe sound and feeling. I am very much delighted in reading your work.

Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest.

---"I don't know what to say. Do read my mind."---VIRGOAN
earthstar
December 17, 2006
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Very good
Touches the heart I like how you use words to make pictures in the mind. Thanks for entering my contest sorry it been so long I have hard time learning some of the changes.So please bare with me. I thinks this very good. Have a great day
xXxSilentCryxXx
December 17, 2006

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww that poem was truly beautiful!!
Thanks for letting me read it i loved it!
Thanks for entering.. x
Providence
November 27, 2006

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Golly!
How on earth did I miss this one. I am sure it had Mr. Wolf all choked up. It is a fabulous write.

I guess I'm not keeping up on things...I must add you to my favs!

Marianne
luckynsincere
November 26, 2006

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AWWWEEEE!!!
You are in a sweet and mushy mood I see! I like this my sweet sister. You have penned one hell of a dedication to one hell of a wonderful man! I am sure he adores this almost as much as he adores you!!! Great job!
Love ya,
Mel
Dlvvanzor
November 25, 2006
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Amazing! Great job!

'You are my
courage when I can fight
no more; and my voice of quiet
reason when my mind
screams in silent
chaos.'

That is my favorite part.

Good luck!
-Dlvvanzor
Heavenly Angel
November 23, 2006
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Awesome
Bel,
This is so truly, truly beautiful! These vows would melt anyone's heart! Thank you for sharing you!
I wish you all the very best in this contest!
Love ya,
Sandy
Xpianistpassionx
November 23, 2006

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very beautiful
awwwwwwww this is such a beautiful poem. i loved it its just so meaningful words from the heart. just wonderful and this stanza
"Today, I take you

in a way like never before.

I take you as you are; as the threads

when stitched together

make me whole." i cant say more than a superb key completing the heart as the two hearts combine making a one whole. just beautifull and passionate. well done. Liana
Marlo Thomas
November 23, 2006

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Eloquent
Your words flow like satin across the page with love and oneness. To love another such as this and to phrase these vows so eloquently is pure passion raging within the heart. I am so happy to read your loving words and wish you all the best. Absolutely lovely.
crystallynnbradford
November 23, 2006

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wow! this was an amazing poem and I really enjoyed reading it. I wish that Jamie could see that this is the same way that I feel about him.
freespirit51
November 23, 2006

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heartwarming
This is a very moving and heartwarming write. It flows with love and devotion in every word. Your words flow well and it made an easy read. Continue with you golden pen.
Poet of Dreams
November 23, 2006
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oooh I love the font! and i love the imagery. and the whole weaving our lives together and weaving a blanket and... oh jeeze i love this entire poem. if it ryhmed it would be perfect! but thats my own personal preferences.

Great Write and God Bless
Pastoral Poet
Ben B
Salt Therapy
November 23, 2006
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OH, and here's your applauds!
Salt Therapy
November 23, 2006

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Holy crap this is absolutely WONDERFUL. It touched me in a way like no other. I think it's just beautiful... I just left a comment on somebody's poem that said their words weave a blanket of peace in my mind, and the last part of your poem is very similar! It also makes me feel the same way ^_^ You are a beautiful writer with a beautiful soul. I hope you never quit! ~ Kerr
- Celticmoon
  November 23, 2006
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  OMG!
  
  How ironic is this that you have read and commented on this piece. I was just reading over your contest! And when I bookmarked it I received the message of your comment.
  
  Thank you so much for your time, wonderful comment and applause.
artis
November 23, 2006

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blanket coverage
warm and woven well and tightly knit like two passionate lovers on a honeymoon night under god's palms and the grooms palms as well...lol......artis
Asylaarix
November 23, 2006
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Beautiful! absoultely beautiful ... love the picture with this ... you really put your heart and soul into this ... very well written and a lot of thought into it ... you did a very good job ... you really let your feelings flow with this write ... you are so sincere and so devine ... well done luv ...

Smile, It Confuzez People
Sparky
- Celticmoon
  November 23, 2006
  
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  Thank You!
  Thank you so very much!
  I am pleased you enjoyed it.
  I wish you the best of luck with the judging of your contest.
  I also wish you a life full of Blessings for you and your Husband to be!
Blazing White Wolf
November 23, 2006

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ummmm oh my swet lioness no making master Blush nott right *shakes head* love you bel you are a doll
Love,
Master