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A great person

You are fun to talk with
I feel like I can open up to you
you make me really happy

You are easy to talk to
I don't have many people I can tell things
you are one of my best friends

Your words are deep
they move me with feeling
you have a wonderful mind

I enjoy talking with you
and getting to know you
you are are sweet person









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There are not many people out there you can call a friend and I found someone cool :)
Written May 10th, 2003

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  • DougMcCue
    July 25, 2003
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    thats what it is... what makes your work so appealing... you use a simple vocab and simple phrazes... but they have all the meaning a poem could possible need... stanza number three was my favorite one here... on to read more...


  • Unbridled1
    June 30, 2003
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    Always a great feeling to find someone you can just be yourself with...doesn't happen everyday for most of us and is a rare and beautiful thing when it occurs.

    UB


  • catz Moderators member
    May 10, 2003
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    Oh, yes, it's always a blessing to have some one like that. I'm very fortunate to have a person like that in my life.

    This is a sweet poem, I'm happy for you that you've found that special person, and you've written about it very nicely. This is a feel good poem for me.


    dee


  • TerrifiedSky silver member
    May 10, 2003
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    It feels good to have someone you can actually be honest with and not hide so much. It's great. More is expressed in my poem ((that I'm getting ready to post))
    Thanks, a lot........................................Jessica.