Myst looked at his picture,
and her eyes filled with tears.
What would he do,
when she was no longer here?
Would he go on with his life,
and find someone new?
When he found out what she did,
what would he do?
She re-read the letter,
a 1,000 and 1 times.
It all seemed in order,
no one should think it a lie.
She felt so bad for leaving them,
because in their eyes this was a sin.
She heard the phone ring,
before the blade cut the vein.
Over the answering machine,
his beatiful voice came.
He told her of his undying love,
and how she was and always would be...
his only one.
Then another voice came on,
it was her mum.
She told her she loved her
with all her heart,
and that Myst had been
her little girl from the start.
As they hung up the phone,
Myst laid down the knife.
She fell to the floor,
and again she started to cry.
She could believe
she had been planning to die
Author notes
This poem is alot about me....10 "Poetry is the best for letting things out"
A contest entry
- Publishing Poems.... by Radiant Eclipse12.
400 points, ended March 2, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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aww very powerful and a outstanding poem I truly enjoyed reading this piece sorry I haven't commented sooner as I regret I have been ill
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That perfectly describes what happened to me... I was in the same situation, and my friend called to say she loved me. Great way to describe what you've gone through, I know it's rough.
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I really loved this poem, and so glad your mum and John were there for you. Thank you for the write, this is just what I was looking or when I made my contest.
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Awww.... sweete I love this. Sad and yet completely understandable. I so know what you were going through but I don't want to get into that(long story).Great write, keep it up. peace - cj-renee
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This was amazing. I'm very glad that they stopped you from doing that to yourself, because if you actually did, so many people would be upset. I really liked these piece, though.
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this is a great piece. i am so glad that they were there to save you. i liked your poem alot and i would like to thank you for entering and wish you luck in the contest.
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