Did everyone hear? The war is done!
No one's body laying out in the hot sun
No one's last sight being the barrel of a gun
Did everyone hear? The war is done!
Did everyone hear? There is peace!
All the killing and hating has just ceased
So we can finally say goodbye the the deceased
Did everyone hear? There is Peace!
Did everyone hear? There's no more war!
No more bloodstains on the floor
No more boys scared at the core
Did everyone hear? There's no more war!
Did everyone hear? No more bloody scenes!
No more boys turning into killing machines
No more boys clutching hold of their dreams
Did everyone hear? No more bloody scenes!
Did everyone hear? There's another war on!
There'll be bodys laying in the hot sun
Someone will stare down the barrel of a gun
And it'll just go on and on
And there's another coming at dawn
Did everyone hear? There's another war on!
Author notes
It's a thunderous protest song
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You have a certain ambiance going on w/ your poetry. I can't really explain it, but trust me, It's a good thing.
This one is my fav.
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Wow, you really had me going. I really like it, I like how you portrayed every detail. How you started each stanza. The repetition in the question makes me know that something is going on, that there is something to be said. Something that needs to be heard, not just said. I really think you did a great on this.
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Very, very nice. I'm thinking of a tune, and although it's bringht and upbeat, it seems to fit the phrasing of the song. We'll talk on the weekend
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