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My Soul Needs To Be Free

Such bitter emotion
Consealed with devotion
So much loneliness
Masked with happiness

Feelings left to unfold
Many storys left untold
Such an unknown desire
Consumed by hateful fire

Bad thoughts all around
Such an upleasant sound
Bad images in place
Frowns across my face

The sadness consumes me
My soul needs to be free
Why can't you just see
My soul needs to be free

I am no longer alive
I no longer can survive
I have lost all hope
I can no longer cope

I want this all to end
No longer can I offend
Please Just let me be
For my soul is now free

Author notes

Erm, I'm not sure I like this, but I guess it will have to do, since I dispise re writing something and editing it after it has already been written. (sigh). Annie

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  • November 23, 2006
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    u sigh too much. i think it was very well written.