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A Lover

the eyes of a Lover
soaked in passion
like rum
lay onto me with persistence

the hands of a Lover
damaged and kind
rake threw my hair
and dance on my curves

the heart of a Lover
beats slow and smooth
like the bass of some distant song that i know all to well

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