i'm sorry in advance
for any guy reading this
i'm sorry to all the good ones
but i'm sick of this shit
i can no longer stand what they cause
men don't even care
and now i sit infront of this mirror
sit here and just stare
i stare at my reflection
wondering "this time, what did i do wrong?"
i can't seem to put my finger on it
so i sing myself a song
then it hits me....
you know what i now realize
it wasn't me, it was YOU
i'm not gonna cry over it
cuz i don't give a fuck what you do
screw you, you stupid bastard
i know you want her instead
you both flirt your asses off, but for what
so you can dump her too in the end?
she wanted you from the beginning
and i realize that's why you asked me
so she'd get jealous, come on stronger
i just don't understand how i couldn't see
i thought you'd be different
but nope, you're just the same
the same as the rest of them
well here, have all my pain
i don't feel heartbroken
just cuz you're a typical man
i don't feel pain of any sort
so take a look at the middle finger of my hand
i'm gone for good
i'm done with you
your loss, my gain
so goodbye and screw you
A contest entry
- Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
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i love it
nice
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Wow..
now i loved the warning of language on the like - you know what im saying i dont know what its called. but this was awesome.. bravo, and i pretty much always thought the same of all guys,.. but not all of them are bad.. we just hope we dont get stuck with the rotten apples. haha.. but good write and good luck in the contest
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Whoa!!!!!!
This is awesome!!!! I love it. I love it. I love it. great write and you channeled some serious emotion into that. Again...Wow. Nice job.
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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Congratulations on realising the truth about men and relationships
Good write, too true.
Good luck in the contest
Ryan -
WOW
wow is all i can say...just wow..major truefulness to it and the "great language" added to its greatness!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow great write
i absolutely love this poem
and there are a lot of assholes out there who just want to hurt us and watch us burry ourselves in misery
i wish guys had more respect for girls -
"them"..."typical".....sucks when people just seem to wanna lump us "all" together....you know,there are more nicer guys then assholes out there,just most of us are not attractive enough for any of "you" to notice.
lol,its a sad world i tell ya.
oh well. -
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
YAY!!!!!YAY!!!!!YAY!!!!!!
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