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Never Knew

All the things that we went through
All those love letters we wrote to each other

Those beautiful words that used to put the biggest smiles on my face
Those few moments that we used to spend with each other

Those smart comments that used to make me laugh
All those peasious moment that we spend together

All blown away in matter of minutes
In matter of fact now that I think about it, it might have even been seconds

Never would have ever seen your true colors for the one that I shared my most pressious moments is the one that look at now with haterid

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  • marshallenator
    December 6, 2006
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    wow

    i can so tottally relate to this poem...it describes the last 2-3 years of my life.


  • Reina
    November 22, 2006
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    great job

    things of the heart not the mind The moment that mark our hearts and hurt us the most are some of the things that were cherished the most and now we like at the past and now see it with hate.