My dog is part this,part that
Full of many fancy tricks
Like jumping over my cat
My dog is part this,part that
Not really thin,not really fat
With happy yaps and loving licks
My dog is part this,part that
Full of many fancy tricks
Author notes
option 6
Written May 10th, 2003
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Comments
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AW THIS IS
so adorable...dogs are a wonder at times(mix breeds are wonderful too) you have to train them to be what is needed in them, thank you for this cute entry, good luck
Linda
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I really liked this poem. Sounds like your dog is pretty smart. I really enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest.
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this was kinda cute and wacky and fun to read
but I can't say that this came from the heart tho -
Triolet like violet in colors of poetry
Billbard (the bard just a thing you do and so not capitalized like a middle name one identifies you with?),
"Merry Mutt(Triolet)" is circular with recapitulation as if verifying yes you'd start the song again :
"My dog is part this,part that
Full of many fancy tricks"
like it's lingerable to be longer than any incidentals you list just for now like :
"Like jumping over my cat"
which has me wonder if that's by avoidance of fighting like cats and dogs on own or you putting the feline in front there constantly on rushed runner.
Seemingness has it that there are spurts of doggie attitudes besides mixtures of breeds ever being mentionable besides the title, like how one would find focusable after getting it and falling in love with it for :
"With happy yaps and loving licks"
certainly not what you've put on the side to see the category away from your chair on the porch etcetera.
It showed the real additions to families they make.
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aww! short and sweet.
thanks for entering! -
oooh♥
ooh la la! very cute cute poem! i liked how you put the last line twice in the poem and i like the background that goes with your poem! lol. thanks for entering my contest! -
Cute poem. It's very well written, and I appriciate this cute little poem in my contest!
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Dogs that are part this and part that seem to have a better attitude towards life. Easier to get along with than the full-breeds. Cute poem.
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great
This is a great triolet! I loved these lines:
With happy yaps and loving licks
My dog is part this,part that
Full of many fancy tricks
Super job! Keep writing!
Thankyou for entering my contest..and Good luck!
Rimi
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Thank you again for entering my contest. NOW I can give you a comment lol. This was a very nice write. I have only seen one other attempt at a triolet, and I was confusd to say the least. Then, I read a column on triolets, so I think I understand them better. This being so, I actually found humor in this poem. Nice job, you made me giggle.
Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck in all you do!!
Debbie -
Thank you for your entry into my contest. However, I am waiting until the deadline to personally critique each poem. This is because I want to be fair and not take favorites before everyone has had a chance to enter. Anyways, thank you again for entering. It means a lot when people want to enter my contests.
Keep writing, and good luck in all you do!!
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This was a cut little poem, and a wonderful Triolet. This should make a great addition to Robin's book. Really good little poem!
Paula -
Sounds like your dog is very entertaining
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lots of seus-ey fun ... >>>EM
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I thought this was a really good poem it is somthing I could see a child saying to someone yet another nice poem lots of love Robin...aka SH
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The best foudn dogs are the best found dogs. Although we have just gotten a purebred teacup pom that is dleighting us. I thinkt he ugliest little dog we ever had was a terrier dachund....and Shelby was definitely NOT smart. But her long little curly body was always warpped around one of the kids.
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awww this is cute. Such a sweet poem. My auntie would really love this. I'll have to share it with her. She just loves her doggies too.
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Pure bred dogs to me,don't have a thing on mongrels.They're the best!
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This is wonderful. I love mixed breeds. I'd never spend hundreds of dollars on an animal when there are so many around in need of loving homes. I love the line "Full of many fancy tricks". It shows that a mixed breed can be smart too. Great write and thanks for sharing.
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